Reviews of The Intelligent Potter

Maybe it's just me, but the author seems to really be trying to push a harry + hermione fanfiction. they're only 11, no need to rush bits like that in yet.

I really like the potter universe, and the premise of this story caught my eye. I didn't make it past chapter 6 though. What's the point in making a whole different time-line when he somehow has impossible leaps of knowledge that he couldn't possibly have since you changed the things he learned and knows of? Seriously I spend half my time interested and the other half frowning while I read.

one I have read this book and it inspired me but also it was nice even though the story got rough halfway through the story but in the end it was good

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As soon as I saw the title I knew it would be a good book but it exceeded my expectations

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Love this story, i always personally disliked how in the canon (most of the time) harry either relied in luck or Hermione to get through **** but this story is dope showing how harry would be pretty op if he actually applied himself to things. hope this story keeps going the way its going.

I read a lot of “intelligent” Harry Potter fanfics and I always thought, “Why J.K. Rowling never thought of this!?” there's so many faults on cannon that I can't help wish for redo! 😂🤦

this a script not a novel example scene 1 in the corridor you will talk with hermione and then cut scene 2 you and hermione will be in the library and talk there and cut scene 3 hagrids hut you will with hagrid along with hermione and cut scene 4 already inside the castle you will with hermione about hagrid you are making a facking script not a novel, the flow of the story is nowhere to be found you cut a part of the story and skipped to the next part

So... he just decides one day he'll get smart and then he does and is now some 180iq genius or something? And for some reason ron seems even more annoying and hermione seems just as dense and 5 times stupider. The plot doesnt move forward like a book it feels more like... I guess just a narration.. hard to explain but it doesnt feel right I dont feel any emotions over anything its just 'he did this' 'he said that'

Your story is rush you doesnt eve build up tge you just put like he know the future and you just waste your concept . hshabahjsjsjsbshabavhaggahagfahavaghqctahavayaggavaaahagvayabv