Review Detail of Loyal_Hunter in The Intelligent Potter

So... he just decides one day he'll get smart and then he does and is now some 180iq genius or something? And for some reason ron seems even more annoying and hermione seems just as dense and 5 times stupider. The plot doesnt move forward like a book it feels more like... I guess just a narration.. hard to explain but it doesnt feel right I dont feel any emotions over anything its just 'he did this' 'he said that'