Reviews of The Heir To Magic
The Heir To Magic
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Uh-oh!!! Another Fanfiction! Remember, it's a wish-fulfillment. It's made for me. If you don't like it, that's because it's a story to fit my specific fantasy. I post it thinking maybe someone else has the same fantasy, same premise as my Star Wars fanfiction.
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Finished a complete rewrite and edit of the first 20 or so chapters, and have since updated the writing style to my most concurrent works. Improved characters, lore, and grammatical structure. Feel free to read or not. It's a harry potter fic, so y'know. You'll either love it or hate it. If you want to read ahead, you know what to do.
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Very good Harry Potter fic. I like the SI, sometimes he comes off as kinda unemotional though, like he's a robot, but that was mainly in the earlier chapters. Finally a story where Dumbledore isn't some crazy old pedo wizard, I was kinda getting sick of those, like I get that he was kinda sus in the original medias but sometimes authors take it a step too far. I enjoyed these chapters, with my only complaint being that they are too short, and that gets kinda tedious to read when not binging the whole novel, but each chapter is engaging enough that it doesn't really bother me too much. Solid novel, hope it prospers.
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