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Writing: 4/5 Updating: 4/5 Story: 3/5 Character: 3/5 World: 4/5 I don't think you can even comprehend how excited and hyped up I was when I saw an Eleceed fic on this website. Now imagine my disappointment when, after like 4 months of it marinating in my library, I open it to start reading only to find out that its just a shitty fight compilation of MC vs OCs with a barebones use of photokinesis sprinkled on top. I wouldn't have minded the OCs if they were at least a bit more interesting than just "bad guy #927382 who gets soloed by SI in 2 chap. Like seriously, I get the reason for making the OCs as while the manhwa has around ~250 chapters in eng, the whole world of theirs is still kinda unknown(like seriously we don't even know all of the top 10). MC isn't bad ig, his personality is if Kayden had cardboard powers instead of electricity. My biggest problem with em is that he wished for Reed Richards IQ(which is a seriously OP power in itself) but doesn't really act like he has 2 gajillion IQ. The writing isn't bad, I'd say average for the shitty novels you see nowadays, but it really feels like the author initially wrote this in Spanish or smth and translated it into English. The story itself is fine, couldn't get past 30 chap. so I don't really have a concrete opinion on it. I did skip ahead a bit to see if it got any better(Vs Jurion fight) and did the inclusion of a whole ass fucking dragon really need to be? All in all, it's an average fic you see on here, def not 4.5 rating maybe like a 4.0 or 3.8. Kudos for being one of the 3 five about Eleceed in the whole world. Overall Rating: 3.4/5
Writing: 4/5 Updating: 5/5 Story dev: 4/5 Character: 2/5 World: 3/5 Writing solid and he constant updates are nice, the story development is really good as well. This is where my praises kinda end. The main problem for me is the MC himself. While I get that the author is making him an asshole on purpose, having an unlikable MC is one of the worst things a novel can have. How is the reader supposed to root for the guy if he has 0 compassion and empathy towards others? His drive to become the strongest while admirable, is solely rooted in him being able to spread his sadism to everyone he comes across. An unrealistic aspect of the fic is that most of the cast seems to like him. All the interactions he has with people is him swearing and being aggressive, so I really don't get how a person can even be fond of him, let alone be attracted to him like half the female cast is. Every other line spoken by him makes it seem like he's from Hazbin Hotel. There's also some ridiculous shit like that whole cabal that was the night where 69 ladies were impregnated by the MC, which is one of the most out of pocket sentence I've written, ever. Overall while the action, writing and plot development is above the average novel on this shitty site, the characters themselves are a weird middle ground for me, though not that bad to the point of dropping. Overall Rating: 3.9/5
I usually hate reading Chinese novels but this one was actually one of the most enjoyable ones to read. The English is not scuffed asf so I can read the fic without getting an aneurysm. The yandere aspect is the thing that attracted me to this fic in the first place and made me read till the latest chapter. Wuxia tropes are cringy most of the time but this one manages to make me not kms every paragraph I read. 4.6/5
Started expectations of a shitty DxD fic, ended with actually enjoying the novel. I'm a professional when it comes to DXD fanfics, having cleared most sites with these fanfics, so I can confidently say that this is one of the ones that are placed at the upper part of the imaginary tier list. I like that Haki is used consistently through the story, with it being one of my favorite power systems. The schedule is kinda random though but I don't blame the author as the chapters, while low in amount, have a high word count. 4.6/5
4.2/5 . Very frequent updates which is good. The story is interesting, I haven't really seen a genderbent Mihawk in a serious fic that wasnt just fap material. Overpowered characters are something of a guilty pleasure for me to read, because most fics with them have 0 character design and or plot progression. Degeneracy is a plus.