Reviews of The Guildless

I've never had to give a negative or at least a low review before, if I don't like a novel then I wouldn't even feel the need to review it. But! I just really have to say something and mark somethings out. 1: this is a novel with a lot of potential, the potential for what it can become and how great an experience reading it could be is a whooping 8 out of 10. But... 2: the characters are too shallow and they have depth to them. I couldn't get invested in the characters most especially the main character. No obvious growth was shown from him having a lack of abilities in the early chapters, no show of interaction with his family (a proper one) that would have made the readers feel more invested in his revenge. 3: he has no emotions whatsoever that someone who just lost his entire family could show. Insteads he goes on a so called random out of nowhere mission to recruit people for his revenge, and kills people and other creatures with the same, ease and finesse the people who killed his family used. 4: what the hell is with him having conversations with his enemies and learning skills from them. A guild that's said to be evil and ruthless, and major leader would leave a major threat to his guild to work around, that's unrealistic BS! 5: what's with the pace! I can't get invested in his power ups and derive no joy from it. Even if you want to make him op, there should be balance and reason and proper focus on his abilities and the things he learns. But instead he's random, not understanding skills or the usefulness, or learning to get stronger and growing his influence before going after his revenge. For a 19 year old he's pretty stupid. 6: you make him op, but as a way to drag the story on the strained plot you introduce stronger characters. If I'll be honest, I'll advice you to rewrite the novel and take it slow. In sixty chapters you've written the story and adventures in 200+ chapters and skimmed over so much information. 7; the world building sucks! There no highlight on environment, culture, traditions, religion, wildlife, politics, even the guild system. No backstory for some of the major side characters, nothing at all. Bottom line, please rewrite the novel and be more invested in it's details. Take your time and write, and feel what you right, but keep it grounded as much as possible. Explore your characters and their feelings and make them relatable. Thanks for the hard work you've put into this.

I changed my review, I thought it was gonna be pretty ok, nothing special. I take that back, this is really good. But I'm a sucker for "Zero-to-Hero" stories, so that may play into my decision.

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The story has potential but sadly the author doesn't seem to continue the story. I would love to get more chapters. I can defenitly recommend this.

I read up to chapter 16 and really didn't like it that much. The points cited may not be in order. 1 - His family (Village) dies and from what I understand he just felt angry and passed (So to speak) despite going in search of revenge. 2 - As much as it has an accelerated pace, it doesn't really count, the family dies and so 1 second of mourning and will train skills, etc. The character appeared there reviving the mc and didn't even say his reason for being there or something, he just appeared, just like the other characters. 3 - Without more or less he will recruit criminals for his guild, not even 1 day knows and trusts despite being criminals. 4 - The guy was there to kill him and was giving a tip on how he could get stronger, like, what do you mean?? The guild is an assassin, every weekly kill report, how will let a weakling get away with a tip on how to get stronger. 5 - The mc even being weak currently goes and attacks the guild known as an A rank and criminal in broad daylight ‚adventurers die every day but he goes and kills in the middle of town and nothing happens‚ being an F rank that even killed guards in the other town. He attacked a guild member and the news about who killed him, the strength of the mc‚ the order to kill him was very quick, the time it took for them to change their clothes. 6 - It lacks a lot of details, seriously, if you tell a little more the story will be very good, even at a fast pace, at least the beginning needs to have details about the world itself, the mc, the other characters. . Well, it might just be rash on my part, after all I've read up to chapter 16 and it's over 100 chapters, it might be better later as the story progresses... Well, good luck. I'll give 5 stars for translation (I'm reading translated so I don't know if it's good) 5 star per release (despite not knowing the release frequency or if it's still with it)‚ 1 star per development‚ character designer and background world. Well‚ sorry for errors in the comment‚ translator.

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I absolutely love this so far! Keep it up! I also love the regular update schedule, so far I don't have to wonder when the next chapter will be up 😁

Read onky 5 chapters and gave up..... OP is cool but atleast be consistent with your story ............,?!’!,.?!!!&’,,’’’’!,,$$(?;?&?,;)&$!,&$((

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I really like the world set up (do wish we knew more though) and the system in it, but I'm more concerned with the lack of personality from some of the characters. They just kind of sit there and follow dante, hopefully they get more flushed out later on.