Review Detail of Anone in The Guildless

I've never had to give a negative or at least a low review before, if I don't like a novel then I wouldn't even feel the need to review it. But! I just really have to say something and mark somethings out. 1: this is a novel with a lot of potential, the potential for what it can become and how great an experience reading it could be is a whooping 8 out of 10. But... 2: the characters are too shallow and they have depth to them. I couldn't get invested in the characters most especially the main character. No obvious growth was shown from him having a lack of abilities in the early chapters, no show of interaction with his family (a proper one) that would have made the readers feel more invested in his revenge. 3: he has no emotions whatsoever that someone who just lost his entire family could show. Insteads he goes on a so called random out of nowhere mission to recruit people for his revenge, and kills people and other creatures with the same, ease and finesse the people who killed his family used. 4: what the hell is with him having conversations with his enemies and learning skills from them. A guild that's said to be evil and ruthless, and major leader would leave a major threat to his guild to work around, that's unrealistic BS! 5: what's with the pace! I can't get invested in his power ups and derive no joy from it. Even if you want to make him op, there should be balance and reason and proper focus on his abilities and the things he learns. But instead he's random, not understanding skills or the usefulness, or learning to get stronger and growing his influence before going after his revenge. For a 19 year old he's pretty stupid. 6: you make him op, but as a way to drag the story on the strained plot you introduce stronger characters. If I'll be honest, I'll advice you to rewrite the novel and take it slow. In sixty chapters you've written the story and adventures in 200+ chapters and skimmed over so much information. 7; the world building sucks! There no highlight on environment, culture, traditions, religion, wildlife, politics, even the guild system. No backstory for some of the major side characters, nothing at all. Bottom line, please rewrite the novel and be more invested in it's details. Take your time and write, and feel what you right, but keep it grounded as much as possible. Explore your characters and their feelings and make them relatable. Thanks for the hard work you've put into this.