Review Detail of ShimizuYoshida in The Guildless

I read up to chapter 16 and really didn't like it that much. The points cited may not be in order. 1 - His family (Village) dies and from what I understand he just felt angry and passed (So to speak) despite going in search of revenge. 2 - As much as it has an accelerated pace, it doesn't really count, the family dies and so 1 second of mourning and will train skills, etc. The character appeared there reviving the mc and didn't even say his reason for being there or something, he just appeared, just like the other characters. 3 - Without more or less he will recruit criminals for his guild, not even 1 day knows and trusts despite being criminals. 4 - The guy was there to kill him and was giving a tip on how he could get stronger, like, what do you mean?? The guild is an assassin, every weekly kill report, how will let a weakling get away with a tip on how to get stronger. 5 - The mc even being weak currently goes and attacks the guild known as an A rank and criminal in broad daylight ‚adventurers die every day but he goes and kills in the middle of town and nothing happens‚ being an F rank that even killed guards in the other town. He attacked a guild member and the news about who killed him, the strength of the mc‚ the order to kill him was very quick, the time it took for them to change their clothes. 6 - It lacks a lot of details, seriously, if you tell a little more the story will be very good, even at a fast pace, at least the beginning needs to have details about the world itself, the mc, the other characters. . Well, it might just be rash on my part, after all I've read up to chapter 16 and it's over 100 chapters, it might be better later as the story progresses... Well, good luck. I'll give 5 stars for translation (I'm reading translated so I don't know if it's good) 5 star per release (despite not knowing the release frequency or if it's still with it)‚ 1 star per development‚ character designer and background world. Well‚ sorry for errors in the comment‚ translator.