Reviews of The Demon Monarch System
The Demon Monarch System
Syphiinz
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- Character Design
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The author did an excellent job at writing this novel. I really love it. [img=update][img=recommend]
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Honestly an Amazing story. Love how the power levels are done and how you’ve handled character development and power development with Apollo and the rest. With how the story is developing it has a lot of potential and doesn’t seem to be even half way yet. My only complaint is the upload schedule as I’m not sure if you’ve said anything about it but it’s been a month without a new chapter and there isn’t any consistency when you do upload so I hope that changes but looking forward to the next chapter.
after reading over 300+ chapters I can say it's a good story but some of the developments just feel lack lustre, one of them being how it plays out with spirits as instead of the mc being the main fighter and focus it feels like he just mostly relies on fuhrer,Valac,etc which kills me as it feels like any power he's gained is almost entirely useless. Another one is the world development, truth be told other then knowing the planet is weak I hardly know much about the world itself as I feel as if we have little information about how the world is truly split up. Lastly it's his companions he's entered the academy with, Odessa,Nadi,Aaron,etc are all hardly mentioned within the last couple hundred chapters, same with Irauk as well idk just a lot of developments that brought down the rating for me.
This is a fascinating, fast-paced story, although the rapid pace, at times, feels detrimental to the storyline. The language is well written and, compared to other novels, a joy to read, but also there are some problems with the choice of wordings and pacing in writing itself. Although they are not faulty per se, they get noticed a lot (in quant), at least if you bulk read the story from the beginning until the current date. I will not go too much into detail on that particular problem, but nevertheless, be that as it may, it goes without saying! WHAT FOLLOWS BELOW CAN SPOIL PROCEED AT YOUR OWN PERIL FOR I WILL NOT SUFFER FROM YOUR IRA My most significant issue with this story is that it, at times, does not let itself take time; I feel there are a lot of missed opportunities scattered around the story. One of the greatest so far is not utilizing Apollo's status as a disciplinary member. It has only come upon two separate occasions. First, I the arc where he got the seat. And when he got chastised for fighting a guy looking for trouble, which in my opinion, should be his job as a disciplinary member. Nevertheless, be that as it may, it goes without saying! And my biggest problem with the writing is the tempo of the writing. At long times there is no pause. Every paragraph continues the next one with connecting phrases leading to disconnection from the initial thought or action. However, this is needed, at times, not to lose the flow in action scenes or similarly intense moments. Even in those, there should be small pauses, or it all becomes a blur and a lot of noise. Nevertheless, Be that as it may, it goes without saying! It may sound as if I am overly harsh on the author and the story, and I am. Still, it is not because I want to be mean or drag the author into the mud, but because I like the story, the world, and the characters created and hope to see the author evolve further in his writing. Nevertheless, be that as it may, cheers from this hobbyist writer and possibly aspiring author it goes without saying, but I'll do so anyway. I wait in intrepidation for more to read!
This nivrl is a hidden gem. I am serious. There hae yet to be any novel that drove me to willingly pay for chapters but here it was worth it. The only thinkg i am sad about is that started to read too eraly. This story is abour a real DEMON not thos pseudo demon novels that just use the name to be cool. Death, torture gore. That is what dou can expect ❤️
I love this book i got to chapter 116 and i hope the author Reads this and Answers this is it doNe or will there be more i Not the beat at reviews but this book was amazIng iT was good some parta seemed kinda Like theY were beingn dragged on and on but i read this hole book in 7 hours so i cant reaLly talk.
So far i am really enjoying reading about Apollo and can't wait for more updates. The only thing missing right now are more inter-personal relations but since this can still can be considered the start of the story (until he goes to the demon world nothing has really started), i can overlook it but i hope to pick up at the academy.
