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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze2yr
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    Call me cold or cruel I don’t care, however the MV is very disappointing his naive personality and hero complex. Like just because he sees humans suffering doesn’t mean they are no longer greedy and self destructive by nature. Also what does helping them accomplish, the answer is nothing. He said it himself even if he helps them they probably just starve in the future, so if anything he is prolonging their suffering. Another thing that bothers me is his almost dual mentality, like one moment he thinks like a dragon the next like a human, but the main one is a human and I understand why due to his past life but really he is no longer a human. He acts like he has accepted that yet still behaves like prominently a human. I really liked this story, there is so much potential and you the author has so much talent. However I’m going to have to sadly drop this novel as I despise idealistic and naive people and this character is the embodiment of that, I was hoping for some growth it those areas but 50 chps in and no change, so sadly I will drop it. I wish you like in writing you story and I know there is some people that will like it.

    Ch 49 Forgotten Duty
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    Tirian's Angel
    LGBT+ · Trraven
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze2yr
    Commented

    Thx for Story just have to say YOU are an AMAZING writer with a lot of potential, the stroyed flowed smoothly with very little plot hole or any at all, while still remaining realistic and detaild. Although personally would have love to see you do the book without the cross over as it was not needed as the development of the supernatural world was already good enough. Hope you uploading saga 3 soon and Aslo hope there is more romantic development and scenes as I love the stroy but would have liked to see more of that from the main character especially considering that he is the focus oh the story Thanks for stroy so far and cant wait to see more [img=recommend][img=update]

    Ch 58 Chapter 32
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    Teen Sorcerer (BL)
    TV · Shinobilifenas
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze2yr
    Commented

    Spirt*

    Ch 34 Beating Heart
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    I'm Finally a Tree, But Why am I a Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Harzche
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze2yr
    Commented

    Another thing author is that you should expand on the magic building and his power/responsible.Also for a so called tree main character he isn’t a tree but a nature sport might want to address that, and finally you improve his character Looking forward to hopefully improvement of story [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 34 Beating Heart
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    I'm Finally a Tree, But Why am I a Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Harzche
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze2yr
    Replied to Harzche

    I’ll try but no promises, honestly he should go through a true tragedy just so he can grow up as a character because I know children with far more maturity and that just sad

    Ch 33 Talaith
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    I'm Finally a Tree, But Why am I a Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Harzche
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze2yr
    Commented

    Have to comment,Honestly highly disappointed, the world building is nice and the setting.However the main character just make me want him to die and painfully pathetic death, he is so pathetic, he doesn’t take anything seriously and has no real common sense or reasoning just plainly put he an idiot.Like all he talks about is about plants and that ok he can have a passion but take life seriously,I see no goal or planning or even any concern over how he is being manipulated and used.It feels like a complete waste of time for him to even get the power he has because he doesn’t even try to understand and use it.If you want my opinion make the characters more realistic aswell as the world being built otherwise the books a lost cause

    Ch 33 Talaith
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    I'm Finally a Tree, But Why am I a Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Harzche
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Replied to DiabolicalDude203

    Well magic is not compatible with electric appliances it cause it to break, not work ect.

    Ch 20 Ravenclaw, First Impressions, and The Problem
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Thx for chapters 😊

    Ch 25 Changes to the Base!
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    Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints
    Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Loving the story so far keep up the good work just hope you make any potential relationship realistic and not so cliche shit.Rather have something unconventional then something predictable.☺️

    Ch 37 Heart
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    World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · TeaDragon1
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    👌👌👌👌👌👌😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ So far it great lover your work just hope you focus a little bit more on the main universe and explain how his power transfer/gain work on earth

    Ch 28 Conversations
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    Into the void [ITV]
    Fantasy · atata
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Not bad so far just don’t like his current character to childish and pathetic also he keeps treating it like a game I hope that changes or I’m gone but so far it good

    Ch 4 Chapter:4 Hunter
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    Reincarnation of a shadow demon
    Fantasy · Kindred_spirits
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    For the love of god if you develop a relationship with hinita I’m out she is fucking useless trash that is not only weak in power but also mentality

    Ch 33 School life II.
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    Professional... otaku? - Placeholder, check description
    Anime & Comics · HavocHUN
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Nice story but **** really I never liked or got the narutoxhinta romance she is basically a trophy wife hell there more chemistry between Saskue and naruto in the story which just shows you how sad of a relationship it is

    Ch 30 Hinata
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    Professional... otaku? - Placeholder, check description
    Anime & Comics · HavocHUN
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Awesome so far looking forward to the future chapters

    Ch 15 Chapter 15
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    The Forgotten God
    Fantasy · Mandi Martin
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Replied to Wallker

    If you payed attention the moment he said father pls stop when he was being beat Gerald stoped this means that there probably a reason.plus he kept signing when he saw van so there has to be a reason It doesn’t come off as a idiot flaunting his power it feels like there is a story behind it anyway I’ll wait and see

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: Commotion
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    My Hermes System
    Fantasy · Romeru
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Thx for the chapter looking forward to the future of the story but hope the main character developers nicely and not some lust crazed arrogant idiot.Also looking forward to see what happens between the guy that beat up the main character,It looks like they could potential get along.Also hope you add more details with the knowledge of the world like ranks ratings and the main character lack of knowledge

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: Commotion
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    My Hermes System
    Fantasy · Romeru
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter I’m excited to see the story behind the gods and I find it funny that humans who should be loyal to the gods think that the gods should be loyal to them like they are the ones gaining something from the gods.Also I hope you explore the flames of sinners more like in that elve dungeon situations are they even sinner or is it humans that are.I hope it not just the generic oh you monster automatically a sinner,because let’s be honest humans are monster just as much if not more

    Ch 35 35 - That was Close
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Replied to Hayden_Scholze

    Ok cool thanks for the work looking forward to future chapters

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    The Demon Monarch System
    Fantasy · Syphiinz
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Posted

    Thank you author for you hard work, is it just me or do I smell Bl not that I mind I’m looking forward to see where the story will go[img=recommend][img=update]

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    The Demon Monarch System
    Fantasy · Syphiinz
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  • Hayden_Scholze
    Hayden_Scholze3yr
    Replied to System00206

    It is lol he just got told he don’t got long to live let him despair he will either break or come back better with more determination

    Ch 31 || Chapter 29 || Am I Really Cursed? ( Part 1 )
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    A Gorgeous White (BL)
    Fantasy · Heather_ANARE
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