VeraMera
The story in itself is intriguing. It begs the question of things to unknown. A story of creation, the first, the beginning. A very enjoyable story if you ask me. Although it could seem a little confusing at the. beginning due to the explanation of light and darkness and all. But that can be ignored or understood if read again. Kudos to the author.
By giving the premise of what the book is about, the prologue did a great job in capturing the reader's attention. I'm actually not a fan of books that start with prologues and sometimes think it's a waste of time but this one proved me wrong. I feel like without this prologue, the story will not get its message across the way it should. I didn't see any grammar errors. The tense and flow are smooth. The conflict is also introduced right from the synopsis. It is a great start. Keep up the good work, Author. I look forward to more amazing content.
A perfect story for romance fantasy genre fans! The female lead is strong-minded, opinionated, and carries her own weight. I love the loving dynamic of her family. Meanwhile, the Male lead is considered a spare heir, dense, and reckless. It really ties into the idea of light and darkness by the vast difference in the main character's upbringing. The author's writing style is strong, unique, and consistent. I'm intrigued by this novel and hope the author releases more chapters soon. Great job!