Review Detail of Husniya_S in The Celestial Empire

By giving the premise of what the book is about, the prologue did a great job in capturing the reader's attention. I'm actually not a fan of books that start with prologues and sometimes think it's a waste of time but this one proved me wrong. I feel like without this prologue, the story will not get its message across the way it should. I didn't see any grammar errors. The tense and flow are smooth. The conflict is also introduced right from the synopsis. It is a great start. Keep up the good work, Author. I look forward to more amazing content.