I don't typically read books in this category, but this one truly grabbed my attention because of the compelling tale. However, if you can condense your paragraphs, readers will find them to be more engrossing. Overall, it was goodđ
VeraMera
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LIKEVeraMera:thank you very much! i'm glad you liked it even tthoug it's not your usual cup of tea. Will take you recommendation and apply it to my future chapters. Thanks again!