SadWanderer96
A fair story overall, although takes some work getting around some of the story development issues early on. Also could use better proofing on the grammar, but the main character's efforts to introduce a variety of more modern technologies and concepts (for a world so primitive it's not even reached the iron age yet) is what really appeals to me.
It is pretty interesting story, but author mess it up. Turning point in this story is when mc leave the village. .. Sometimes i cannot understand what author write. . Sometimes i confused by the plot. . N then championship whatever pop up. . This story already has good world setting, op system and good starting. . But i think mc character , hmmm i dont know how to describe it. . So in conclusion i dont strongly recommend it for u all to read. . But maybe for killing time, perhaps. .
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It was ok but after chapter 29-30 the author fucks up, it seams death has no meaning to the mc. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................