PinnacleExistence
There's nothing better than play ball đđ and play good, but for that you gotta work. Just keep working and it will come.
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PinnacleExistence9dCommentedI just came to say, I thought this was about LeBron
Prologue- PinnacleExistence9dPosted
sorry, author, but this story is too raw.. couldn't go through the first 10 chapters.. the author concentrates too much on the MC and his egoism and arrogance.. every 3 paragraphs mentioning the MC's age and how he built this and that.. there's no explanation to doing things, just doing for the heck of it or because the MC is a genius. I would recommend building the world better and creating meaning for MC's actions, giving depth to the scenarios and events..
- PinnacleExistence20dReplied to VXZD_ZD
unfortunately, not.. author used a translator, and back then it wasn't even good.. it's readable, but hard to read it continuously.. for me it was easier because I'm Brazilian and so I can understand some errors that come with Portuguese - English translation
"12 days just, not much I thought it would take much longer." - PinnacleExistence22dReplied to IMightBeGod
how old are you, then?
She was doing her best to hide her deep sense of unease. Oh my goodness! Dear Lord, please, help guide me in this difficult matter. I don't want my son to sin six times each and every day! But what are our other options?! I wish Suzanne were here; she always knows what to do. But these problems are so terribly embarrassing that I don't know if I can even tell her about it. Besides, I'm on the spot to make the call right now. I'm the parent here; I have to step up and make the tough choices. - PinnacleExistence23dReplied to Nachtregen
is it cheating, though? she would've broken up, and if didn't want her to, he could just not have cheated on her
Feelings - She wants you to make her forget about her boyfriend who was cheating on her. - PinnacleExistence26dReplied to Chibaku_Monster
was about to say lol
'Maybe if I can find a good numbing agent or ability, then I can do this more often...' Peter thought as he waved his hand and opened a portal to the Mirror Dimension. - PinnacleExistence26dCommented
Tony Percival Wulfric Brian Stark
For the good of the people, of course. - PinnacleExistence26dCommented
harem lovers are burning inside right now, this is their whole reason to exist đđđ
Peter sighs as he looks down at his right hand and smiles wryly. - PinnacleExistence28dReplied to Ellis8261
I guess, if you consider cheating on your wife with a teammate's wife bad enough.. đđđđ
"I want him out," Tony declared firmly. - PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
author, i think you are trying to pace yourself too much.. the chapters sometimes don't have meaning.. i get that it won't have everytime because you need to set up, but reprising events from real life will hardly get any excitement if Javi isn't majorly involved.. the rookie challenge was great because we saw the MC be active, but there's a few chapters where the story seems to go backwards instead.. i just ask to build on the storylines better, not just telling events..
Ch 58 All Star Weekend: Slam Dunk Contest - PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
"Sign the contract, big boy, sign the conrtract"
"Good, sign the contracts."Â - PinnacleExistence1mthCommented"How big is it?"Â
- PinnacleExistence1mthCommented"She is a powerful warrior. The issue is my size."Â
- PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
god dayummnn
"In that case, turn into a human form because you are ugly to look at."Â - PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
one of the worst quotes of all time đđ
"If you kill a killer, the number of killers in the world remains the same." Bruce urged as he walked towards Selina and held her shoulder for support. - PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
this is really true.. i was really happy, and then I wasn't, i broke up, and now I constantly think if my decisions were the right ones..
"If you love someone, he could make you sad. He could even make you feel lonely sometimes. But that someone can also make you happier than you'll ever be..." - PinnacleExistence1mthReplied to Shadow_Dragon_9805'*Sigh* It looks like my love life is on its way to hell even before it begins.'
- PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
that is a nice remark, author
"Oh, she went out with Mr. Whiskers to make preparations for a little party she is arranging to celebrate your return. She should be returning soon. However, I would advise not to do or say anything to anguish her. Her mood was never that great after you left for your training. So, she started to push herself too hard which took a toll on her mental health. So if you do something to make her cry, then it will be me who will be the one suffering the most since I will have to choose between supporting you and supporting her." Alfred whispered back. - PinnacleExistence1mthReplied to Yaotzin_Aldrete
much rather Gotham City's version
Hell, I didn't even trust Selina as much as I trusted the old butler. Something about him just yelled loyalty. Even though I didn't know what went on in that disciplined mind of his, I knew it as a fact that he would much rather kill himself than ever betray me or the Wayne family. - PinnacleExistence1mthCommented
I had just searched for rail guns today for a friend's story.. China just made public use for cc in protests..
The entire mansion had professional defense personnel in black full-body suits with high defense capabilities roaming all around the estate ready to take someone's life or give theirs in case of an invasion. Even their guns had been upgraded into electromagnetic variants that normal bulletproof vests wouldn't be able to stop.