Review Detail of Aburama in The Avarice System

chapter 25 felt totally forced and the grammar is degrading more and more every chapter this went from an interesting story with promise into a confusing mess of poorly-written English and forced circumstances, that being said I'm still going to read it in the hopes that it improves as I'm genuinely interested in the story but im not too optimistic about it. Writing Quality - 3 stars because I can at least understand what's going on Stability of Updates - 3 stars Because I havent caught up so im unaware of how consistent the updates are Story Development - 2 stars as of chapter 25, it's starting to go downhill as the previous 24 chapters of the story became basically pointless, as some characters namely Roger felt like you built up his relationship with the mc for seemingly no reason as you killed him off out of nowhere without reason other than just killing him because you could Character Design - 2.5 but ill give it a 3 since I can't put that as a star rating, the character went from a seemingly smart mc and turned into an idiot for the most part at first you had the excuse of him not fully unlocking his memories but hes already unlocked most of them yet he does stupid **** and doesn't think of uses he could get out of the systems features even a dumbass like myself thought of ALSO stop replacing the mc's name with "boy" its irritating World Background - 4 stars for being interesting, so far all we know is he lives in a village after being abandoned by his father with there being another village thats a 4 hour run away from the one he is residing in and that there are kingdoms, empires and noble clans scattered throughout the unknown continent with mysterious beasts and powers held by the previously mentioned factions