chillnutella
This is the first book on WEBNOVEL I have ever finished. Which is saying something. Author, wonder story. You have given another version to the werewolf culture that I simply LOVE. I loved Tori and her feisty nature. I love that you kept her personality the same even to the end. I love Xavier and his need to protect her no matter what. I love the story behind everything that has happened to both of them. Truly, a wonderful story. I do reccomend going back and editing. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that, beautiful work.
A sassy & funny FL and a strong Alpha King. Of this I would have enjoyed it more on it explaining a bit more on ‘his side.’ His character seems to not be quite filled in and is solely her view. The scenery is fairly vague. Leaving details out and unanswered questions. None the less- the basics are strong enough and I still feel satisfied on the overall experience.