A wonderful story ❤️
It seriously needs editing though. I would be honored to edit this story for you, and any others that you write.
A little more background on some of the important characters , would be good, also.
' Man, Tori that must of sucked big time! Glad you're all better now. What type of animal was it? A rabid dog?' He said his tone contradicting his facial expression. I furrowed my eyebrows at him in confusion. What was wrong with him?