Reviews of The Achievement Junkie

The starting is a train wreck, but the writing shows substantial improvement after that. It's just that this seems more like one of those "slow-life" or "slice of life stories" that a regular adventure one, which is not my cup of tea. It's a pretty good book in that category if you happen to like those.

Wow, just wow. I feel like this novel needs an urgent rewrite Author seems to skip cause and go straight to effect In his writing style, completely ignoring the glaring plot holes and lacking character motivations in the process. This is not to say the character concepts are terrible, just their execution. You cannot claim a character acts a certain way, ignoring all common sense due to a deeply ingrained trait, and then frivolously deny it the very next chapter Spelling and Grammer is OK but it is incredible sloppy writing that butchers this story, suspension of disbelief in this story=non-existant All in all the story goes the way it does solely because the author decrees it, not because the characters have any real personality.

im at ch. 168 rn and can ANYONE tell me when TF mc will understand, A SECRET isnt A SECRET if YOU TELL IT TO JUST ABOUT ANYONE AND EVERYONE YOU MEET. am i the only one who thinks my dude has mental problems????

useless mc beta, which idiot guy refuses a girl he sincerely wants to sleep with, and he also refuses to sleep with his wife after marriage 🤭😵😵

Really good read. the world is well built with plenty of cool places that have diversity so they feel different when the characters are there. the story and plot progress well. The beginning can be rough if you don't like main characters acting like a pr*ck. he gets better and develops while he finds out who he is. still kinda a pushover sometimes though.

The main character is an arrogant douche and possibly a psychopath when you make an isekai story you will always have to deal with the first kill issue the main character is from our world seeing someone murdered in front of him should cause some response even if there a jerk and while our main character wasn’t the one to kill them it should still cause something aside from that it keeps being written like his stare is of someone stronger than he is that make absolutely no sense maybe if the game he was playing was vr these issues could be overcome but I doubt it at best he could shock people with his knowledge but he definitely couldn’t intimidate anyone who isn’t a total buffoon he was a janitor if you want to get past these things you need an explanation but there is none aside from that his relationship with females develops too fast

So I’m not normaly one to write reviews on novels but after some consideration this novel deservs to get the attention. Now that being said as the titel of the novel indicates the story is a bit different and I mean that in a good way, but hey you checked the novel out so it means you at least enjoy this kind of story. Now a little disclaimer, the story is a bit slow at the beginning and it might feel like not much is happening bit it picks up the pace a bit into the story so even if you feel like something is missing I would recommend at least reading the free part . Now for the more reviewing part of the review, you might disagree as I’m no proffessional. I have my own preferences and biases but I will try to be as honest as possible so keep the non constructive comments to a minimum. The writing according to me flows nicely and transitions in a nice way from scene to scene and helps imersion in the story. It’s to be grammaticaly correct most of the time since it is impossible to be completely correct without someone solely dedicated to proffreading and even then it is hard. That said it was a bit worse the first bit of the story but as the author has grown it has become really good. 4/5 Since the beginning was a bit stale but the rest of the story makes up for it. The update stability is at the top on this website as the author most of the time not only keeps to his high amount of releases but when he for some reason can’t he always tell us why and makes sure we know what is happening even when it takes longer than he expected. 5/5 Even though this will only be important once you caught up and are hooked like the rest of us. The story development had a slow start with not to much happening. That being said, it kicks up a gear after the beginning and starts taking you through the huge world of achievement junkie and indicates that there might be something more. Many small things that you get introduced to that seems like it not to important comes back and show its importance, demonstrating how the story direction and framework was worked out early on and gives the reader the satisfaction of connecting the dots. 4/5 The beginning was a bit too slow started but still well planned out and important while the latter parts is that but also faster paced. For the caracters I can only say that this is the best novel I can recall to have so many characters that feels memorable, alive and uniqe. It’s almost a disservice to the author to try to describe them, so if you read to enjoy the characters this is the novel for you. 5/5 Simply amazing The world background is nice and and fleshed out with even kingdoms histories being described (in a nonrambling way in contrast to me XD). Descriptions of the environment is plenty enough to help keep the immersion but not so much it clogs up the story. All that aside, not only is the novel well planned out, it is hinted at much more coming. Imagine the marvel cinematic universe but novel edition. We don’t have to much information yet how exactly it will be done though so dont fix your mindset on that until then. 5/5 World history is fleshed out nicely, environment decribed in a good nonannoying way and there is more coming/is planned out for the story universe. Thank you for reading my overly long review (I just wanted to be thorough). And since you were able to spend this time just to read through this long of a review, know that the story is more worth to spend the time on. At least read all the free chapters before desiding to keep reading or not.

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I will be biased and stated first that this is a hidden gem. I really enjoy reading this story and it keeps getting me more excited as to what's about to come with all of the foreshadowing. So far, I have really high hope for this story. --------------------- Now for the unbiased review. (I mean, I will try to be as unbiased as possible) The story is about a guy who won himself a ticket to another world by completing the achievements inside the game. The world he's summoned to is the same game world, but in the far far future. At the first few chapters, MC is a jerk, literally. So, he might be a bit unlikeable to some people, but that's where character development is for. As of chapter 39, he's a bit more likeable. Not much, but the development is there albeit slow. I would suggest you read until the end of volumn 1 to start judging this novel. Writing quality is quite good and near the top, there's still error here and there, but overall, it won't affect your reading. So, you can expect the sentences to flow smoothly and enjoy your read. Stability of Updates. Well, If I'm able to, I would even give this story a 7 star for the stability of updates. Enuf said. Story Development. If I'm to be biased, I will probably give this one a 5 star as well, but I couldn't. Even though I love all of it, I sure know that someone might not. As of chapters 39, there's no major action yet. If you love action pack novel then you might feel bore real fast, but the action is not really the main focus and charm of this novel. It's the interactions between characters and foreshadowing that keep me hooking for more. The author did a great job with it and there's a lot to hope for in the future story development. If you aren't concern with the lack of action in the earlier chapters then I think you will definitely love this novel. Another thing, with how the story progress, you could also expect a face slapping, but it's not too much or too low so even if you hate this category, I don't think it will affect your read that much because there's a lot more interest thing to read in this novel. There's also some cliches, but it's not much either. Character Design is great. Characters so far have a solid background. Some even a bit darker than they appeared to be, but that's what add depth to their character. Most characters introduced so far are unique and quite likeable. There's a lot to explore about the world background. There's not a lot to say about this really because so far, the world background is solid and make you want to learn more about it. With the MC's background being knowleadgeable about the world because it's inside a game he used to play, there's still many mystery and a lot that he himself doesn't know. Overall, it's a great read and you should give this novel a try. --------------------- I couldn't speak for everyone and this is honesty my personal opinion about this novel. It's pretty fun, enjoyable ride and I really hope for more. I hope you all enjoy this novel as much as me!

Overall I was really enjoying the story and characters, until I got to one specific plot point. I hated and disagreed with that plot point so strongly that I decided to stop reading. I mean seriously how would anyone in their right mind think that blackmailing someone you know will become far far more powerful than you be anything but an absolute horrible idea. that is essentially guaranteeing that they will hate you and come back for vengeance someday. to use an analogy it is like laying explosives in the structure of a house you are building and then proclaiming how sturdy it is. makes no sense and completely lost my interest.

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I'm leaving world background at 4 since history is kind of vague (for me) like, are level50+ monsters slumbering or are they really dead, in another dimension or waiting to be reanimated by the evil god. What happened to the followers of the good god what were the effects of the final battle between the two gods? How come the trodar is the only country in decline, will the 7 neutral gods "only exist when mc is at the right level"? But of course the story is a very good read, not as in-depth as other novels i've read before but still enjoyable and managed to convince me to keep on reading and ask for more chapters Also, a suggestion, somebody pointed this out but missions turn out to be " missions" not achievements. But this can be fixed by naming an accomplished mission (similar to "all for none, none for all")

A pleasant story to read. The story evolves calmly and its contents change compared to the usual stories. The mode of evolution of the character when it is original and rather well found. If you are looking for a light and well written story. Try there ...

An amazingly written isekai story with interesting characters, world and well handled development and if that wasn't enough it's even regularly updated

It's an interesting read and well written. Although i don't see how the achievement system is any different than him just getting missions. not that it really matters to the story. keep it up.

A very fun story with good grammar. Very addictive and good all around. Hope this gets continued for a long while to come, qweertzuilkjhgfdsayxcvbnmwsxedcrfvbhjk

Good story overall, and I am enjoying it. There are some awkward moments but that matches the character development and how real life behavior works. I hope to see more updates in the future and it keeps its current quality (or improve :P).

After reading these adventurous chapters of a story yet to complete it's bloom, I will certainly say any fan of Fantasy, Gaming, story, and much development in characters and setting, along with wits of comedy will enjoy this series without a doubt. The writer of this amazing tale wrote this book with the magic that only true creators posses. Follow on with your own imagination and you will not be disappointed. Delve into this amazing world with an open mind and let adventures unfold before you! - Chance L. Tanner