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Okay, let's begin with chapter 1 where the FL is thrown over a bridge by her own brother (Okay, I understand that) but there wasn't a single person passing by to save her? No one saw her? Or the bridge wasn't bustling, perhaps it was late at night? Then how did they reach there? I've so many questions which are unanswered. Our FL seems to be white lotus and survives only to wake up in a hospital after long time. She gets saved by ML who appears to be some hunky guy who's mum want to set him up with some girl. MC knows the FL (but still unclear how) takes her home and the gradual love story begins (Oh wait! Am I giving spoilers?) :p Talking about writing quality it is readable (although I always get confused by Chinese/Korean/Japanese names) There are numerous tense fluctuations and a few loopholes but I believe it will get better further. kudos for doing more than 300 chaps~
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