It's a well developed and interesting read. I am not a frequent male protagonist novel reader but this author's work in one of the works I personally like. The characters are interesting and funny. The author is consistent, hard-working and dedicated. Their grammar has also improved !! (Author is a good listener!). Do read it, it's worth the shot! ;)
There are a lot of worlds of magic out there, but the Dragon Mortal's Tale pits the main character against a dark reflection of himself, bound to his very existence, in a way that leaves the reader worrying about the latent threat. The author does a fantastic job describing the world and making you care about the main character!
Heya, author-san here! First of all, Allow me to bow to you guys, my fellow readers to make this book become recommended and next week, weekly feature! GRATITUDE TO YOU GUYS! [img=recommend] I swear when I saw this. I was crying, I never thought, despite of my major weakness and lack of my experience in professional writing. You guys still support me and even gave me that massive amount of vouch to me! *sobs happily* I'm on an unhealthy condition now which, But I promise you, I will be back on 1st Sept with many exciting chapters ahead! Hartpeler bows to you guys as the gratitude! I'm going to make sure that I won't disappoint you guys!
It's a pretty well written story, the characters are well rounded, and the background is described in incredible detail. My only complaint, however, is the random paragraph separation. It makes the flow feel a little choppy. As well as that, there are some punctuation issues. Other than that, well done!
The story is insanely detailed, it's like that he has OCD with this or something. I heard the author is not on good health, that's fine. Give him a time to rest and he would deliver us an awesome quality again!! I did see his major grammar flaw. But up after chapter 18, it's improved significantly. Kudos to the author
just in case to remind, I've started to re-releasing the older chapter as I'm going to release the new one every day. But I will tone down the chapter release, from two chapters per day, into one/day until I can tally the changes with the latest!! If you want to get the more update, you can access Tales of the Dragon Mortal's discord at: https://discord.gg/WPMPy8q