Review Detail of IyaneIyane in Tales of the Dragon Mortal

Item: Tales of the Dragon Mortal
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

IyaneIyaneLv33yrIyaneIyane

Hai kak.. Aku yg dr fb. Good story, but the grammar mistakes make it hard to follow at points. World building is good, but also jumps a bit. Keep up the writing and keep working.

Tales of the Dragon Mortal

hartpeler

Liked by 3 people

Replies1

hartpelerAuthorhartpeler

haha. salken, yes. i had some grammar flaw that i'm trying to fix now. as story goes. i will fix it eventually, welcome aboard DMT fellow! :3

3yr