Reviews of System: Harry The Harem lord
System: Harry The Harem lord
great_gamer
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First, let me say that I have no writing experience before this novel, so, if you are expecting great writing from the first chapter, then I have to disappoint you. Of course, my writing gets better with each passing chapter, which you can see and compare with the 14th chapter. After the 14th chapter, each one is getting better. A few points to note: The story is about young Harry, who gets the system and some memories, in Harry Potter World. I will be adding new characters (most of the girls, few boys for the sake of the story). There will be nine Horcrux, not seven. Each year will be somewhat different from the original. Harry's main goal is to become Harem Lord, so the story will focus in that direction, not on Voldemort. There won't be cultivation. book will focus on magic. I am giving my novel five stars not for the current chapters, but for the future. Before the novel ends, it will have the quality of five starts. Believe it! (sounds like Naruto๐) I am writing this novel to improve my writing skills. I appreciate all the help I can get. Please leave me constructive remarks to enhance my writing if you may. Thank you!
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Read quite a few reviews about this novel, so this is mine: First things first, it is an "R-18" rated novel, with the word "Harem" in it's title. What does that mean? It means "SEX SCENES"!! If you not like them in general or does not like them in a Harry Potter fan-fic, you will probably find this novel displeasing. But, the author has made everything possible to warn you what this novel is about, so if you read it, you will have no right to come back and complain about it being "vulgar" (to put it nicely). Now as for the novel itself: -the writing was terrible in the past, but some good editing has done the trick for this novel and it is now actually quite good. -the updates are somewhat stable, about 5~6/week, but there were periods of time with no updates (about 2 to 5 days) -the story is no good. Nothing really original and it is just the mc using the System to become rich and powerful and get more women, etc, etc... And there is no indication to show that there is going to be an explanation of why the System exist, where it came from and what is it's purpose. Just the standard typical system framework we all know and love(?). -the characters are quite tricky to judge. They can be said to be the same with the story: typical for the genre and nothing really original (mc strong, smart and with big penis/ women beautiful, smart, horny). BUT, so far, the characters that show up in the original Harry Potter keep most of their original features but we are shown a different side of them here. Yes, it is a more horny and shameful side (especially for the women) but I personally like that about this novel. I mean seeing characters that I already know and love (or hate) in an entirely different view. -the world background is EXCELLENT! It is the reason I like this novel, really. The author has done a very good job into explaining the world of Harry Potter in a scale far beyond Hogwarts. The original Harry Potter series is, in my eyes, one long school arc, with a few out-school scenes and events, with only the last book being outside of Hogwarts, but the final showdown still happened there!! What about the other schools of magic, the wizard communities outside of England, the political struggles in the worldwide wizardly world? We are given only small glimpses of those and I find it a shame. This novel has already shown a wider scope of the world of wizards in the UN and the US, and refers to schools other than Hogwards. Overall, it is a standard system/harem story you might expect it to be, but what makes this novel special to me is that it gives me the chance to read about the parts of the wizardly world that were left out in the original series.
The beginning is really interesting and the premise is excellent, but it continues badly. After reading chapter 12 I was unable to continue. Ok the harem, in fact I was very intrigued by a harem in Harry Potter, but it is very badly managed. A protagonist who only thinks about earning points and having fun, without thinking about the feelings of others. The story had taken a bad turn when he had chosen Petunia as his first target and he was only one year old ... but I was able to turn a blind eye, since he wasn't really a child. I can't rate the story too badly even though I dropped it, as it is well written, with good character descriptions. Personally I don't recommend it.
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It's pretty great, hats off to the writer............................. ...................................................................................................... ..................................................................................................................................... .................................. ..............................................................................
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The story revolves around harry or you could say the fake harry...... He got himself a system and starts the journey to complete his harem and defeat voldemort...... Overall a good story and brief background.... Author did his homework..... Everything is great sometimes there are long breaks thats why people usally dont vote it but if it becomes a regular one that would be a different story........ I like its a great mature novel..... Author has a good command to his pen, he write in a very understandable and explicit manner..... Though he is not concise and precise over the words..... There are variation in chapters in terms of words, some time less and other time more...... But overall story is good thats all that matters.....
Amazimg story(line) so far, really enjoying this business aspect and having Harry as an *****. I do enjoy a bit more story than constant *** now and then but you have already done quite a remarkable job in that. Sara is my favourite character for now, hope to see some more development Really looking forward to Hogwarts where Harry will be younger again, with younger characters and a nire energetic enviroment. Keep up the good work and remember to capitalize names.
