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The author seems to make the reader look stupid. It's the worst thing in life. It's not surprising that it got a score of 3.8 Giving a rating of 1 is still too much, it's really bad. The main story is interesting, but when I read it there was nothing bad about it, it just sucked. I read about 50 chapters and nothing improved at all. It sucks.
I read until chapter 59 and its toooooooooooooooooo much inner monologue, tooooo much explanation...i mean even in the middle of conversetion you explain things tooo much which is annoying...most of the readers already read many novel and know the concept so no need to explain things toooo much...i hope you can consider this comment and improve,,,this is just my humble opinion...๐๐๐ Sorry for my bad english
this is really one of the best novels I have ever read.Its world development is really good and our mc is also not dumb but a smart guy and the system my god this system is the best.author if you are reading this please make mc powerful enough to travel another world with his power make him powerful enough to be strongest in the Omniverse
Chapter 59 It's better to stop reading than it's really bad. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Great story. I admit, this is my bias as it is the first novel I read were it is a woman dominated world but after coming back to this story, I can see that the execution was excellent. ๐๐พ Keep in mind that it is the usual Chinese plot as the skeleton of the story but it flows really well and it's in English and not in the Chinese/mlt style that other stories will have. This is one of those sleeper stories that get b**bed by bad reviews because some of the readers are too impatient and can't handle a little bit of suspense. But don't worry, it'll workout, just trust. Tldr: great execution of a light hearted concept. Where the plot is (in generally) the MC talking advantage of the future events. But it's still a good read as it is not too predictable.
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