Maplemoron
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Maplemoron2dCommentedCh 35 The Dinner table!- Maplemoron3mthCommented
oh no
"Eternal torture, death, all of that is too good for you... You are one of those responsible for hurting my God's Daughter... So, only pure terror awaits you." - Maplemoron4mthCommentedAlex simply nodded his head, trying his best not to throw up whatever was in his stomach right now, as he debated over the practical applications of giving himself a lobotomy with a plastic spoon.
- Maplemoron6mthCommentedCh 51 Holy and Dark Factions
- Maplemoron6mthCommentedCh 25 Date [2]
- Maplemoron7mthReplied to DaoistGreenOnionCh 181 Being a poser is not a crime
- Maplemoron8mthPosted
I don't get what is so appealing. the world building is good but that's about it.negatives; The mc is both op and not. his growth is insane but his actual power is above average at best. also in the first 60ish chapters it feels like he hasn't earned anything. conflicts are resolved half heartedly and there's no growth or pay off. the romance also feels incredibly cringe and forced. just being a nice guy and slightly smart sometimes doesn't make you so amazing as everyone in the story around Mc seems so keen to point out. stop shoving it down my throat please. pisitives; excellent world building and magic system. the world feels flashed out and has plenty of room for growth and exploration. the magic system in this world feels interesting, it's not too dumb and not too complicated so people get a good idea of how it works. overall; really well done world and magic system but the main characters are so annoying. also it feels like the first 60ish chapters are a giant prologue which honestly could've been shortened to 20ish chapters. which since it's a prologue, there's not much growth in characters which is a huge waste. oh well, maybe I'll come back.
- Maplemoron8mthCommented
But he's really not tho. like he got some good points, but bro has a mountain of interpersonal things to work on...
Suddenly, Isadora hugged me from behind, pressing her ample bosom against my back. I could feel my face turning red as she whispered, "You're really amazing, Lumiere." - Maplemoron8mthCommentedAfter almost two months of this, a loud scream of joy filled the training room. "I diiiiiiiiiiiidddddddddddd it! Finally!"
- Maplemoron10mthCommentedCh 24 First Date
- Maplemoron11mthPosted
- Maplemoron11mthCommentedCh 119 119. She Is A Virgin, Right? — Alia
- Maplemoron11mthCommented
the biggest complaint I got is the pacing. bro you need to fix this for a long time gain. a 100 chaps and not even a week of progress. maybe try splitting up events into multiple days or shortening events. also, you tend to double-explain things sometimes. like please, I want to love your work, but you gotta fix these issues. keep up the work, and I hope to see you improve over time.
• Sped up the story - Maplemoron11mthCommented"I mean, he might well be able to seduce the perverted hammer, and she'll do whatever he wants like a good little bitch."
- Maplemoron11mthReplied to SHADOWBLADE< System message: You have received new clothes >
- Maplemoron11mthCommentedCh 249 World Law's Affection
- Maplemoron11mthReplied to HutchTheWolf
yellow, orange, red, black are bad fortune. green, blue, purple, gold are good fortune. silver I can't exactly remember.
Jun Tianyun looked at the plane with his Eyes of Fortune. Everything looked green and like that. However, Jun Tianyun didn't notice a faint silver light overlapping the green light. - Maplemoron1yrReplied to JosieGanCh 123 Hu Lili
- Maplemoron1yrReplied to i_wuv_webnovel
DECAFFEINATED COFFEE?!?! YOU MONSTER!
But as an experienced novel reader and business strategist how can Elandor give up so easily, he had used many tricks in developing business which included blackmails, extortions, kidnapping etc.