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The only regret I have from reading this book is that it's completed! It truly is a surrender to grief and I enjoyed every single chapter of it. You know the feelings when someday you feel the need to cry but can't find out how? This is the book you need. It describes emotions well enough to make the lump in my throat to come out. I haven't finish reading them but I'm adding it to my collection so I can read it later on. Can't be sobbing while I'm at work, can i? đ
Wow. I can say that the author managed to describe everything in such a grave way. As expected from the title itself. The author has a very vivid description for readers to immerse to the MC feelings. There's also some mystery as well (I sensed), but not too clear yet. Waiting for author to keep updating to get readers anticipated about the story!
Wow, this one really tugs at the strings of your heart. I was only able to read up till the first pay wall, but what I read certainly had me hooked. The feeling of loss and pain the protagonist faces losing a loved one really struck a raw nerve with me as I have also had a family member taken from me. Really powerful opening. I will be sure to check out the rest of this author's work.
Although I was only able to read the first couple of chapters, the premise of this book already has some excellent potential. As a fellow author that enjoys writing and reading works that have a poetic style to them, I would highly recommend this book to authors and readers alike. However, the only thing I would point out to work on would be some of the grammar within this book. There are only little things, such as, not capitalizing 'I' or just missing words and punctuation in a sentence that would make it flow better when reading. Nevertheless, this is still a very good book, and although I mentioned the grammar it still does not take away from the author's ability to suck you into their story.
Hi there! Here is my review: I really, really like your writing style. It's very poetic but it doesn't make it boring and lengthy. Poetic stories aren't really my cup of tea, but for this, I make an exception. The emotions are well written, and the feelings of grief and loss are really realistic. So far so good. Oh right, there was one big issue tho: I want more chapters! ;) Keep up the good work!