Review Detail of kaboo in Surrender to Grief

Although I was only able to read the first couple of chapters, the premise of this book already has some excellent potential. As a fellow author that enjoys writing and reading works that have a poetic style to them, I would highly recommend this book to authors and readers alike. However, the only thing I would point out to work on would be some of the grammar within this book. There are only little things, such as, not capitalizing 'I' or just missing words and punctuation in a sentence that would make it flow better when reading. Nevertheless, this is still a very good book, and although I mentioned the grammar it still does not take away from the author's ability to suck you into their story.