incarnadine
diehard tower of god fan; likes kpop, manga, anime, books~ Author of 'Retiring as an Incompetent Queen' https://www.webnovel.com/book/retiring-as-an-incompetent-queen_18875466706564505
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Are there actually readers out there? Or am I writing into the voiiiiiDddDd~ (just joking, it's nice that you're here!) If you have any questions or observe any plot holes/grammatical errors, feel free to comment and I'll do my best to fix them! woohoo for 6k views!
Hi, author, the first thing I loved about this novel was its concept. The strings, interconnecting based on different types of loves, really was incredible. Although there are some grammar mistakes, the concept was fantastic, and the characters were presented nicely. Hats off to you~
perhaps 'felt,' instead of 'feels' since it's past tense? :))
There's also Baronet, below baron, but baronets typically have this status of a commoner, and thus, aren't really nobles.
pronounced 'uh-lev-yar'
To clarify, if anyone gets lost, the Resilian-Elevyarian Woods are the forests that separate Resilia (pronnounced ruh-sil-li-uh) and Elevyar (pronounced uh-lev-yar). The Argent River is in the middle of it, and there is both a Resilian side and an Elevyarian side, which the river separates.
In case there's any confusion: metal is a sub-element of earth, but it's still considered a separate element! The main elements are the usual ones: water, fire, earth, and air.
The dialogue flows, and the characters are really well-developed! I can tell that Luna's used to being the former queen, and can't adjust to her reality just yet...she's a unique lead that I'm looking forward to reading about~ I'm curious about her fall from grace, though, but I'm sure the author's planning for that in the future! Can't wait for the next updates! Good luck!