DreamStolen
I’m currently only at chapter 9 but I can already tell the author of this story is like me when I’m writting an essay and trying to make the words count. The story feels super slow because the author keep repeating the same information over and over again and only make slight changes to the sentence to make it seems different.
Nunca me esperé la presencia de la fruta de Shiki y de Wipol, la inclusión de Perona, Carina, Yamato y muchos otros personajes. Personalmente me gustó mucho como cultivó a las primeras 4 chicas antes de Robin pero después de ella el resto pasó como a no tener importancia más que ser herramientas (como la rehén y la Secretaría) Fuera de eso, esta historia me ha dado muchas sorpresas que la hacen agradable para mí.
It's a great story.. I love it!!! It's quite rare to see MC/El who have a Life Return.. I don't mind with MC which have his own adventure (not join Straw Hat Pirates), but how crew Straw Hats Pirates without one of them, so Nami join is a little weird for me (Because she's one of their pillar, how they can sail without their navigator).. But I still love this story 😍😍😍 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Great job author san 👍👍👍😁😁😁