Is Rookidee already evolved?? I forgot when he evolved 😂 I know that he not fight gym leaders in Cerulean, but didn't he fight and win againt Koga in Fuchia gym?? You didn't write he win againt Koga there 🤔

It's should be Kleavor, not Klevior 😁

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that "Ash" is more smart and do his job to train his pokemon to become stronger.. He not only caught pokemon original Ash caught, but also other pokemon.. I like to see he still go with his friends (Brook and Misty), but he also go with Yellow.. I think he should go to Rota to learn and train his Aura.. I also hope to see Yellow got better with her power.. I like Ash interaction with his pokemon and other people.. Why he have a double (he create it using his Aura)?? It's not Naruto.. And why he play to much at crucial time (like when he fight Executive Pretel in Lavender Town).. That's my only complaint.. But overall it's a very great story 😁👍 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too... It have system that show stat, give quest, etc (like most system).. But the reward is so great/generous (his luck is so good) with Larvitar, Caterpie, Charmander (all three with variations), great skill or ability (Aura, X-Ray visions, etc).. I like how he's specialist in variation pokemon, it make me can't wait to see what other pokemon he will get (because his pokemon all is uniques or legendaries).. Hope his Feebas egg will hatch soon and become a variation too, maybe shiny, speed, and element (shiny is a must, although his mother got shiny from Team Aqua).. What I don't like is his Aphaty.. Especially after the drama it cause to Joy and Jenny clan.. Hope his pokemon can cure it or at least decreased it so much.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the daily life/slice of life of MC/Albert and his interaction with his friends.. And I think he should be in Ravenclaw (he's smart and full of questions.. A Ravenclaw quality) than in Gryffindor.. He's have a system, he can upgrade his skill with system and do his quest/mission.. But why there's not much appearence of his system?? What I hate about him is, why he take the horcrux (Ravenclaw Diadem) with him to his dorm after the first time he got alert from his system (when he almost be corrupt/influenced by the horcrux).. It dangerous not only for him, but also his friends.. He should stay so far away from horcrux (he still first year and can't have a way to destroy it now).. My interest to read this story is down to drain after he take the horcrux (Ravenclaw Diadem).. It's dissapointing to see he's smart and always cautious, but still so stupidly be corrupted/influenced by the horcrux (and he knows about how horcrux can and will try to influenced him, but still go near it).. And he know he's different (maybe be influenced by horcrux), but still not return it, or tell Dumbledore quickly.. I really love this story at first, but I don't know if I'll read more after this.. It's so frustating really, to see the stupidity of MC/Albert about the horcrux.. I hope you back to make MC/Albert like before.. He's focused to his school/lessons and friends.. And don't involve with horcrux matters.. 🙏🙏🙏

Sorry.. Don't realize that it was a spoiler.. I'll do it next time 🙏🙏

It's Filch.. Argus Filch And Headmaster Dippet, not Dippo

It's a very great and unique Harry Potter fanfiction!! I really really love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great and interesting (although short) plot/storyline and quite good english/translation (you always use the opponent names when talk. Like Leo says "Hermione" when he talk with her, you can use "you" instead).. And grammar is good too.. I like how MC/Leonard is focus with his research then interfere with story.. I love how MC/Leo is friend with Hermione since before Hogwarts and later become lovers (not that I hate Ron, but Hermione is too good for him.. They so different, like fire and water).. I also like that this story show how Harry and Ron is many difficulties without Hermione with them.. It also so different from original story, like Philosopher Stone trial, Lupin and Sirius still alive, Hagrid fates, Umbridge dissapear (this is my favourites Umbridge fate from many other stories), etc.. There're many thinks I don't like about MC/Leo (like he's too cold/eliminate any his enemies. Love researching magic so much that he don't care about others, like he let Voldy ressurect to see the process. Etc).. Although I understand why he's like that (he's researcher and don't care what others think about him. He also don't know much about human psychology, like it's fine and normal for him, but not for others), I still don't like it.. I also agree with him so much about kill his enemies, so they don't come back to hurt his family, lover, and important person later.. There also don't much appearence of Harry in this story, he's like secondary/supporting character in this story (Dumbledore appear more than Harry in this story).. But I understand, because MC/Leo not have many interactions/encounter with Harry and Ron.. Love your story so much author sama 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a really great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. Usually I don't like an op MC.. But I like that MC/Setsuna is op in this story.. Because of that, he doesn't afraid to change the future/oiginal story (although it still back to original story after Madara left Konaha, with Izuna now).. I hope you will tell about MC/Setsuna married life and what will he do next to protect Uzushio author san.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a good Naruto fanfiction!! It have a good story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like that MC is not op.. And I love that he have a Wood Style/Mokuton.. What I don't like is his attitude/behaviour to Kushina.. I know he doesn't want to get involved/problems with Kushina, but he doesn't have to be so rude/bad/evil to Kushina.. I also don't understand why he killing his classmate (Hyuga Sora)?? It's ok to tell others he train in secret.. It's normal for a shinobi to train to improve himself (no matter if he's in the top, middle, or bottom in class, it's understandable to train).. So why kill Hyuga Sora?? He even don't train his Wood Style/Mokuton.. He only train his physic/body and stamina.. I like that he try to change Nawaki (and maybe Tsunade too) fate (although it was for his own profit/to have a change to touch and absorb Hashirama necklace).. I don't like much that he lie to Tsunade and Might Duy to make them accept him as disciple.. But I'll not complain for this, just not like his lie.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!! I like it!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translate.. I like the idea of Gluttony seal (can absorb his enemy soul and any seal), it make the MC strong (not from the start), but he must beat stronger enemy if he want to be more stronger.. I like he help Hotaru, Anko, Karin (although for his benefit),, he still kind enough.. I don't mind a harem, but please not too much (no to "he take all beautiful women").. And please no Sakura, Ino, and Hinata to his harem.. Tenten and Shizune is ok, maybe Kurenai and Yugao too 🤔🤔 It will be so much different story with MC/Kuzo kill Orochimaru and Kabuto from this early.. I can't wait to see he kill Danzo as soon as posible (he's the top must kill list for me.. His evil deeds can't be forgiven : He help Hanzo kill Yahiko, he kill Shisui and make Itachi kill all his clan/Uchiha genocide, I'm sure he's the one responsible for Sakumo suicide, spread Naruto secret as jinchuriki Kyubi, etc.. So he must be dead as soon as posible) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍

There's improvement for a few first chapter author san.. But there still many Chinese name (like Moonlight Hayate, should be Gekkou Hayate, Uzuki Yugao still wrong I think, etc)

It's really great and interesting Naruto fanfiction!!! I love it!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too 👍 I like the idea of system corpse point, it's interesting to see he get point from destroy/decomposed corpse.. I don't mind an op MC (although he doesn't how strong he is after 3 years he got the system).. I also don't mind how cautious MC is (many say he's coward because he always fighting with a clone, and he only come after fight is over.. But I think he's smart and overly cautious, although he's not to do so now, his wood clone can hold again Raikage and Tsuchikage).. I hope MC/Natsu can become Hokage (and maybe kill Danzo, the two conselor/elders, and Sarutobi).. Konoha need new hokage/blood to change and make Konoha great again (especially kill Danzo) Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great and interesting Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like that MC/Orion not op from start (he even weaker than other First Year when he go to Hogwarts).. I like his power (absorb other magical power/creature to make him stronger).. I also like his pet/familiar Red, is rare to see others phoenix beside Fawkes, hope to see/read Red more in the future.. The story is interesting too.. To see Merlin memory, magic power level, etc.. I like that he train Rune, Magic Bender, etc,, to supplement/protect himself from others (especially bully like Malfoy and his gang).. What make me dissapointed is MC/Orion as reincarnator have future knowledge, but why he doesn't changed many thing (like troll insident, Hagrid dragon egg, etc)?? I understand if he afraid to change so much, but little is fine I think.. And why he join Gryffindor?? If it just to know about the plot, it's failed, he often forget about important event like troll, etc.. He can go to Ravenclaw (he doesn't interest other house) instead, it will make the story more interesting.. Maybe make Hermione and Rose (I like genderbend Harry) join him in Ravenclaw.. Please make them his love interest 😍 Who is Nick Iron?? Can't wait to see his reveal.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

MC will join Ravenclaw right?? The seeker is Cho Chang in Ravenclaw from Harry/Rose 3rd year.. Make him a Chaser or Beater or even Keeper for me 😁😁

It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too.. I like that MC/Alaric don't afraid to change/influence the story (Hermione in Ravenclaw, so she's not join Golden Trio).. He also go to Ravenclaw, not join Gryffindor to join Golden Trio.. I don't mind an op MC, as long as he still need to train, not got it from start (MC got unlimited potential, so he still need to train to get strong).. I also don't mind harem, as long as MC not take all beautiful women (a few is enough, and let original MC/Harry get his women).. I hope MC/Alaric protect Luna when she go to Hogwarts next year, and she join Alaric group.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Demon Slayer fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the idea of MC/Hotaro become a demon, but still have his sanity (not want to eat human).. I also like how he try to make Kanao show her emotion.. It interesting and funny to see his interaction with Shinobu.. And Kanae is so kind (please save her/don't let her die)... Love your story.. Keep up the great job author san 😁👍😍😍

I know it's late because now is wednesday.. But please continue 🙏🙏 I like your story author san.. It's really good 👍😍

It's a great Demon Slayer fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the idea that MC be a teacher at the start, and then become a demon slayer after married to support Mitsuri.. I also like his power.. Hamon is strong and interesting power.. I hope MC/Kotaro can develop it to fight demon easily in the future.. The minus point in this story is MC/Kotaro tell his wife/Mitsuri about his reincarnation.. I agree that as husband and wife he can share his secrets.. He can tell everything except that, it should be a secret.. But overall I love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a really great fanfiction!! I like it!! 👍👍 It have a great storyline/plot, but the translate/english is quite bad (although I still understand what it meant, it still a little pain to read).. The grammar is quite bad too.. And I really feel Chinese here (character name, Huaxia nation, etc.. Can I ask what is name of MC 4th friends?? Why she is national anthem??)) I like that author choose to make Avatar, Fast and Furious, Marvel, etc game in alternate Earth 😍😍 I really like this kind of story (slice of life MC make game copy/company).. Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍