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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06636mth
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    Well written fanfic.... atleast mc is still sane and not thinking with his ---- Overall it's nice background story mc is powerful but for some reason it seems to lack a goal....he is just surviving and making himself powerful.

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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
    Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Replied to SrCuervo

    It ok bro, i will try...well if you also don't mind me, i also have a little wish...can you try to write a novel about wizarding world.. not just about school but broad magical world of HP. Just set character to a person who recently graduated and exploring various communities of wizards. I am sure it will be a nice project for everyone...you can take some inspiration from fantastic beasts movies...

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    Harry Potter: Legacy Keeper
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Just what the hell is going on...he is making things like Island and castle on his first year...even in Chinese fanfics mc play with mud in his first years...just what is this shit.

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    000007
    Book&Literature · dukeofvirtue
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    I like the character very much... although i am bit confused about that vivraniam or something as i didn't played hp game but overall novel is good.

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    Harry Potter: Legacy Keeper
    Movies · edgy_incel
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    That title brushed memories of a good song.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Wake Me Up When September Ends
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    Harry Potter: Legacy Keeper
    Movies · edgy_incel
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Ok..the story till now (chapter 18) was good. Bit on the sad theme but not bad... Some points were similar to another hp novel...like one in which Harry's parents were alive and his grandparents died instead....Or he had sister named Rose or something, but in that novel Harry was way too arrogant....well it's just the beginning of 1st year... let's see where story will take us..

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    Harry Potter: Heir to Ancient Magic
    Book&Literature · Guryon
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Well, there are too many imaginative fantasy in novel. Like hyperspace in the depth of ocean. If ocean depth goes beyond 60km then pressure will be so huge that water will turn into ice aka ICE 6.( Not possible on earth but other planets in space, yes if the planet is completely a water body with strong gravity.)

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    Deep Ocean Survival: A Submarine From The Start
    Sci-fi · Dog That Doesn't Know How To Wander
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
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    Well i like author's efforts to even pull this story out...read all the chapters and they were all good...like them very much.... people are constantly complaining that story doesn't follow MCU plot...but why does it need to follow MCU plot...there are literally many parallel worlds in MCU....you can stir the hotch poch as much as you want...mix anything you want....why limit yourself to the plots of movies.....just go for whatever plot....there is phoenix in MCU, in DXD and also in Harry Potter...but who said there can't be various types of phoenix when there are different types of dragons in Harry Potter world...over the top it's fanfic....some times ago i even consider to put Prince of Persia in HP because of sands of times lol...so just enjoy the good fan fic people and stop complaining about plot holes...

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    Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Overall it's really nice story... although the whole hero vibe is bit too sweet in MHA mc puts practicalality way above anything else. I don't know how nezu will when mc will Japan lol

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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Bro i don't know if you will read this comment but i will write it anyways.....i really like the 298, 299 and 300 chapters.... Do you know how i imagine the seen?....it's like two actors were singing a song while playing piano seperated by a mirror time.....its really beautiful.... thanks for the great story

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    No more updates....i like this novel very much....sigh now I have to go back on reading fanfic

    Ch 240 MHS - Chapter 237
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    My Hollywood System
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    I lost interest after seeing that mc went to ancient one just after four or five chapters.....why..... although i admit that magic can help in many things but atleast let her pass and when Strange become Master of Kamertaj then go to learn....it's boring

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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    As much i remember MCU spider man was just a child when iron man 2 was launched....the kid version of Peter was also shown when the killer robots of Iven attack....

    Ch 3 C3 Testing Powers
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    Hay...have you thought about making a cross over with your other novel... something like MHS x Versatile Super star.....both are Hollywood novels...maybe it will be fun for too..😁

    Ch 223 MHS - Chapter 220
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    My Hollywood System
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Overall it's good, I don't like the whole idea of going to the past.....if he just develops in his time it would be better... There are so many things in marvel to explore...you can even try different gods of other beliefs

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    Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    Mc going to make other movies of Marvel???

    Ch 215 MHS - Chapter 212
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Posted

    Ok, what I like the most about this story is its details...and what I mean by details are the magical families details and author's creativity..

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    A Bend in Time
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    The author dragged too much...just be over with it....at least be more creative to name the chapter....

    Ch 98 The Chunin Exams - 24
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    Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    you are wrong that orochimaru is not good with seals..on opposite he is really good.....he modified the soil reincarnation jutsu...a completely sealing based jutsu(sealing a summon soul in alive body) of 2nd hokage.

    Ch 93 The Chunin Exams - 19
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    Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
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  • Rajat_Sharma_0663
    Rajat_Sharma_06631yr
    Commented

    If i am not wrong then Karin Uzumaki was also in this exam from the sound/grass village right.... author can set their meeting in forest.....

    Ch 93 The Chunin Exams - 19
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    Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
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