Reviews of Steampunk Apocalypse!
Steampunk Apocalypse!
SnoozySloth
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Why are all authors sadist and repetitive about MC , sad story + inflicting psychological and fizical abouse ,and lets not forget about revenge (killed clan/family) i don't see how this can be consider an original novel. Doesn't deserve its rating.
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I got to chapter 4 and now I am dropping the novel. There are two things that majorly disappoint me in this novel. 1. The MC. From the synopsis I expected an intelligent MC. One that solves his problem by outthinking his problem/enemy or by using his inventions. Until chapter 4, one can see how the MC deals with his bullies, the monster that attacked him and his bully that appeared in school. That way is by stupidly rushing headstrong into them and by the way losing. 2. No reaction. With no reaction I mean that all you get are sequences of events one after the other. You never get to see the MC properly reacting to any event. If there is, it is an unimpressionable sentence or two. The consequence is that as a reader you don't care about any event and any character and character relationship. How can one even care. Once one event is over, another event immediately happens. For example: Him waking up after fainting at the destruction of his town. You only see him reacting to his lost arm. That's it. He was not devastated that the town he has spent his whole live in is gone. His home is gone. His possessions and money are gone, etc. No sadness, no tears. No reaction to such a tragic event. You see nothing. The hunter signing happens and then he is already on the vehicle to the new town. Another problem is his relationship with his father. You can see that his father is important to him, because he is signing to the hunters because of his father. However why has his father not appeared again? I was waiting the whole time for his father to appear and them having a heart to heart talk. Nothing. If he can pardon his father as an esper, why is he not requesting to speak with his father? The last time he saw him was at a freaking town massacre. His father could be injured, etc. Why is he not worried or wanting to speak to him, if he is so important?
Great "inspirations" if u know what I mean but nothing plagiarized so feel safe to keep reading it cause the author is great enough to make the work his own; in my opinion the best anti-hero novel in qidian (pls recommend me good ones if u see this comment); and the novel is still is too "new" to make an in depth analysis so to what I've read it's really a good novel
Even though the beginning was a little cliche and MC not the smartest and likable sometimes it good a lot better with time. Great novel better than most of the published ones and top10 of the original ones. Love how the world works, the legends of the past, the mystery about a lot of stuff still, how the cultivation is so far from cliche, everyone has God reasons to fight and not some dumb young arrogant master. GREAT WORK AND I AM A HUGE FAN
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