Review Detail of drefond in Steampunk Apocalypse!

The novel is good despite the initial problems and it would be nice for the author to read this ... Writing Quality: good, google translate right so should not be bad Stability of Updates: So far so good, there was a day missing Story Development: has some problems with the first chapters (that mark the author as beginner / *******) that is a lot of history (and omissoes) in many chapters, he should have expanded the part in which he is in the city and further developed the character, for example, it is the hour where the personality is described so that the decisions and the change of personality have more bases and impact (not to know how much the character changed with the awakening and with the torture because the old personality was not shown to us), also to create the basis for the intelligence and knowledge of the protagonist, for example that he could have built a steam gun he just did not want, that would say he has knowledge about weapons and exos, so he takes the doubt from where he learned the projects of the things he does - "mistakes" are not exactly mistakes but something that can become a problem in the next novels: 1 ° the time of development of the protagonist in relation to the world ation to us and number of chapters is very good) only a few months since he woke up and he grew very fast, it can be a mistake if the protagonist does not have a price for these advances in rapid succession, such as lack of reliable men to work and keep everything in his absence and cause difficulty in the organization of the group and he managed to do it only because of the disaffection of the people with the government and the emotion of the moment and if he was elected as new governor he would not be able to keep the group together, and in relation to his increased power torture and the premature 2nd awakening have made his soul rigid and fragile and so it breaks easily and his temperament remains unstable and limits his growth and control over his energy and that along with his tender age cause an easily influenced and controlled mind (vulneraval to mental attack and influences of his body (alligator)) and last do not forget who is the histor many authors forget this and make the story revolve around the heroine (or friends) that is useless and is in constant trouble and the protagonist has to go save her, I was very worried when the yuki got amnesia I thought she was going fall in love and end up becoming a burden for the rest of the story, if they do not separate I'd drop the novel. Character Design: I described the above problems, I gave a 3 here because of the beginning World Background: Good, I gave five and it has power for more because we do not know the rest of the world and the protagonist may seem strong but he did not fight with anybody who was a specialist in fights, saitama is a fighter that focuses on precision and effectiveness so he was engaging and the ruler was a specialist in hiding (as Saitama said) he still did not fight with the director nor with the president he was only captured, we were not presented with space and time, other dimensions, other metals and methods forge and other ways of using the powers of different continents, it seems that we know a lot but with a little effort on the part of the author to make us, the readers, feel what it is to be the frog in the well. and these problems are ******* because the author was in a hurry to go to the good part of the novel so he skipped the creation of the base and accelerates the parts he thinks annoying or bad as the part of the prison he left out the reflection of the character of the character on it gives to get out of prison underneath if all the mines are connected etc.