Reviews of Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

:D So Elandor got kidnapped into the novel that he admired. I think it is a good start for any adventure. Plus the girls in the world seem to adore him so much heheheh.

Author I really love this pls don't drop this pls.And can u make the story progress a little faster

Yandere? Say no more Yandere = Library

What more could I say? this novel is great just keep it up Author! by the way I found this image somewhere... this is how Aushima would look like to me.

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

i thought this story would go beyond 500 chapters the early ending was a shock.

i like the mc...this novel is really good...i will spend my power stone just dont drop this novel also it will be good if you add more girls for him 😉😉😉 (im not good at writing a review i just wanna try)

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Amazing and unique storyline, novel so far is full of adventure and fun. Characters are very well written and described. I love the thief MC the most. I can see potential in this novel. All the best author!!

Great work author, interesting plot and character design, even though the book is still in its early stage, I can tell that it has great potential, so keep up the good work. i'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌

so, to be honest, I started this thinking it would only be bad, but I was surprised to find myself scrolling, and scrolling, then scrolling even more, what can I say, the author knows his stuff. this story is simply a lot of fun, the title fits greatly, but don't think it is some trash story because of it, give it a chance and you won't regret it!

an interesting start to a very vivid and colorful world. the details are so strong it makes me feel like I am there with the party of heros. I have only read seven chapters but I can truly tell this author has great talent. keep up the good work.

Read till chapter 8, so far the plot is really amazing and the language is very easy to understand too. You can feel the emotions clearly and can relate to the MC's actions. There were some grammatical mistakes and other queries which i have already mentioned in the comment section. It was fun reading it and I wish author all the best. You're doing great!

Lots of great attention to detail and wonderful execution in the writing of this novel. It's a great piece of work that I highly recommend you read!

The writing quality is not bad. There are close to no major writing mistakes, only small ones. Please try to put the phrases in small paragraphs, because you spread them too much. I've noticed that from chapter 5 you start to describe your story more as a reporter would tell the news and less like an ongoing story. It would be best if you visualised your characters while writing. From a present, step-by-step peace you start writing about it like a past event ( where there is no interaction or dialogue, just descriptive ). The character design is very good, nothing to say about it.

It is unexpectedly a good novel and the male lead is not Chinese-Korean-Japanese. The quality of the writing is good, the development of the story is entertaining to read.

i enjoyed reading the novel. although it is facepaced there is a lot of plot and character interactions are very smooth and doesn't feel force

good background and the story its a mix and match of harem and novel thing. i liked the mc name and the short chapter. good work hope u do well.

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So far, it's interesting enough to grab a reader's attention. However, I would recommend that readers read past the first few chapters before deciding to drop or continue. The book isn't bad IMO but it could use some adding of flavor and uniqueness. The book sounds like it's heading to a massive harem plot with an OP character which is fine if appropriately executed. If I'm right, author, please don't let it be one of those books where the girls fawn over the guy senselessly. Synopsis: Honestly, this is pretty weak. I believe the synopsis is the same as your opening paragraph to your first chapter. It doesn't really captivate the reader to check it out. Just my opinion but I believe a synopsis that gives an idea as to where the story is going would do much better. Writing Quality: Organization is pretty good so great job there author. However, vocabulary and punctuation is where you fall short. You even had a few run-on sentences but those are few to none. An example of vocabulary was when you used man's as a pronoun when it should have been men. I recommend using grammarly to fix these issues. Gave this a 4. Story Development: Nothing too insane but it does the job. The first paragraph went straight into the matter which I liked. Sometimes build up is needed but you did this quite well and caught me by surprise. I'm sure other readers will say the same. It was quite captivating though things seemed a little confusing for a while after that. Rated this a 4. World Background: Not much was said about this as it was hard to picture where the characters were. They didn't interact much with the world around them and not much was said to detail how it looked. Sure, small hints are given every now and then but they are quite vague. Would recommend adding more details to bring out an image. Overall: I rated this 4.4 but the story has potential just like any other. It just requires the author to keep pushing forward and not give up. A lot of author's give up because they believe that their story is failing but hopefully, it doesn't come to that for you. If it does, please remember that writing is a process and unless you're some sort of prodigy, you won't always ace it the first time. What's important is to keep moving forward. Your book can do it and win the WPC. Good luck, author! I'm sure you have what it takes! I'll also send a PS in support to help with the competition (I have bad memory but I'll do my best to try... If you don't see a PS from me, don't be afraid to reply to me here lol)