Review Detail of MWse in Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

The writing quality is not bad. There are close to no major writing mistakes, only small ones. Please try to put the phrases in small paragraphs, because you spread them too much. I've noticed that from chapter 5 you start to describe your story more as a reporter would tell the news and less like an ongoing story. It would be best if you visualised your characters while writing. From a present, step-by-step peace you start writing about it like a past event ( where there is no interaction or dialogue, just descriptive ). The character design is very good, nothing to say about it.