Yiyi Lanxi
I dropped at chapter 5 due to following reasons 1 regular questions that are answered in 1st chapter aren't (character ages, what profession did she have in previous life, what was her family situation, what type of world was she from, what century from, what is her personality type -which can be understood based upon reaction etc from Reincarnating but no reaction to dying and living in another body/world) (what caused reincarnation) 2 she has a superpower the description of which was extremely bad, and wood DOESN'T create water also removes any form of "Brilliance" MC could have through the use of modern knowledge example - improving plants could use irrigation techniques, compost, spacing between plants making makeshift shelters to keep plants from cold or wind. do any of that no I'll just stick my hand on it sending a mystical power without explanation and speed up the rate of growth to immediate (not grown anything so far except speed up a fruit tree but obvious what will happen ) 3 in chapter 2 info dump of her new family of in-laws leaves 0 impression on readers so they will have 0 clue of who is who I made sense of only half even though read it 3 times 3b. inconsistent with members of said family, the husbands father has 3 children her husband is the 3rd son within a few paragraphs it becomes 7children, one of the sons being 13 4 no mention of MCs age from previous life, or current life or age of any characters this should be mentioned within couple paragraphs these seemingly insignificant issues are what build a connection with the reader allowing them to get at least emotionally invested in a character as they haven't been done or even thought of readers have 0 forms of connection and end up feeling like it is bothersome this is issues I've seen within 5 chapters not enough to give accurate review so that's why 3 stars
Review Until Chapter 40: Love the story. The plot was good and the characters are okay too.🤗🤗🥰🥰 FL has Nature Power with Space System (Like Lin Yuelan/Xinlan’s Little Green and Space). The only thing missing is the spirit water/spring. The FL’s space is missing this. In this book, her power was called WOOD but calling it NATURE’s Power is more apt since it connects to all living things plus WATER. Her space is a system that detects plants etc. this power just came about and no other explanation was given so far. I’m not sure if FL came from modern era, apocalypse era etc. And it was not mentioned how she died in her previous life. ML, Shao Yunduan, is a Cultivated Talent Scholar at the start of the story. No age mentioned as well as any power. He’s very shy and innocent in relationships😈. FL loves to tease him. Pet peeves in this story: Sister-in-law and Use of Ms. in the story. Translator could you please change and edit these. 😤😤😤 Sister-in-law is also being used by the juniors to call their aunts-in-law. Why not just call them Aunt to make it simple?😤😤😤 The mother-in-law and husband call their own spouses and in-laws with Ms. Why not call them by their name or wife or husband etc. it is soooo alienating and cold to hear. Especially if one reads it with the Eldest Shao Branch Family. So awkward to read. Just use Madam for the mother-in-law and use names for the juniors.🤨🤨🤨 Also, the aunts would call Qiao Xuan as Niece daughter-in-law when she happens to be the wife of their nephew. She should be called as nephew’s daughter-in-law right?!🤨🤨🤨 Translator please edit it. So awkward to read such a good story. These words ruined the flow of this story in a way.😇😇😇 Please release this next… we need the next chapters🥰🥰🥰 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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