Rain Butterfly Dances To The End Of The World
I remember reading the raw, I quited around chapter 700. Just a heads up for others, but only about a month or 2 passes in 700 chapters. The other thing is that the author jammed so much stuff within that short time period that it’s just stupid. Also there’s a lot of face slapping like any other Chinese manhua.
The concept of the synopsis sound like this would be a decent slice of life novel. Hopefully it can be picked also not let down my initial impression of it. (This is only a temporary placeholder review when a couple (20) chapter is released I will either change with my opinion on the story or delete it all together.)
Hello all authors. Please stop writing children protagonists into stories clearly designed for adult leads (or at the very least somewhat adult-late teens). Anime and japanese light novels influenced and ruined an entire generation of what could have been amazing writers. At no point does it make sense in this novel, nor in 99% of other CP novels. Ruins the entire reading expericence and decimates any form of immersion.
If the MC wasn't a toddler it would have been a 2/5. The story is bad, made even worse by the illogical age of the protagonist. Not a single aspect of this story makes sense in any capacity, nor is it fun to read about a prepubescent child doing what he is doing here. The author needs to be institutionalized.
Dont read here and spend your money on this book. You are just being ripped off by this disgusting translator. Take note, the current latest chapter of this novel is Chapter 208, that is in premium. I have checked the raws and chapter 208 is different. In the raws, what is shown in chapter 208 is in chapter 135. You are not getting your money's worth for the chapter purhases. This is blatant riff off.
There are several types of stories out on Webnovel. This type is both stupid and extremely reality bending. System stories that give rewards that include ownership of cars, houses, businesses, ect..., are plain absurd. In most cases the absurdity ruins the story for me. Here we start with an absurd MC who is 8, which tells the audience that the story is supposed to be absurd. Instead of pretending to be a serious modern system story with semi-realistic characters and a bunch of romance and face-slapping, we have it taken from the direction of a spoof. This is not meant to be taken seriously at all. It has all the bad modern reward system story methods, but because the MC is an 8y old it changes it from painful to stupid/funny.
my old eview seem to be gone, anyways more discrepancies, 4th sister Ye Chan, always made bad meals or mysterious meals that was avoided by Mc and the other sister. sudden ch 390, they said Ye Chan always made good food but little under cook due to impatient. Seem like author restart story or copy another check in story around the ch 378. cuz Mc bought clothes to go check branch danglong in jinling. however he seem to been to that branches multiple times, so why employees don't remember him