Reviews of Serendipity - A wink from the fate
Serendipity - A wink from the fate
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I’m hooked. No need to say anymore. I love game novels where the protagonist is a good gamer. But it has always been male leads. But now a FL gamer?! I’m willing to pour my time to read this...And no one is stopping me
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Gives me King's Avatar and Wotakoi vibes and it's so awesome! It makes you want to fall in love while playing games lol ahaha. Seriously a good read! And your descriptions... I have a lot to learn as an author heuheu. Your descriptions are very mellow and transitional smooth. I prefer descriptive novels actually... but this is on a new level since it's a very modern kind of description. If ever you write a fantasy or sci-fi novel, I'd probably read it from cover to cover. That's how good you're writings are. Keep up the good work! You're almost there ^ ^
Overall, a pretty nice story! Mind you, I've only read around four chapters, because I'm not really a fan of purely romance-driven stories, but here's my review: Points to improve on: -Grammar: It's actually really good compared to most originals here, but there are quite a few silly mistakes here and there (small things, like usage of plural or singular nouns, so they do stand out IMO). -Flow of Story: It's great, and I can immediately imagine the scenes in my mind. However, the pacing can get too fast in some areas and slow down in the next paragraphs. Be careful of that. -General Storytelling: I like how the side character, Xixi, was written and she really helps out in making the readers like the FL more. However, there are some characterization points that can be too rushed. For example, I did like how the Archaeology professor was actually the ML's mother, but giving out too much information about the ML and his past all at once was a bit too rushed for me. If it really needs to be shown in that specific chapter, then it would have been better, perhaps, if these were "shown" and not "told". Great points: -There are too much great points to list down, really! Generally, it's a great romance story, and the characters are likable. To conclude, It's a great story! Romance-driven plots are not really my thing, but this story is quite interesting from the first page onwards. Give it a try and read it yourself! Good job, author, and keep it up!
As a part of my new honest review policy, I will not hold back. Okay so the novel starts with a ferocious roar. No seriously. It start with lightening and thunder and a fresh serving of ACTION. The MC is Mo Hua, a university student who has developed a bit of an addiction for an online game. Immediately in chapter 2 we're meeting the male lead, also a gamer. He is described as a person who doesn't have much interest in girls but he has actually been interested in Mo Hua. If romance novels in a gaming setting are what you're interested in, it is a good idea to check this novel out. As for me, I feel like the first chapter was very well-paced but the moment the FL accidentally bumped into the ML and we switched to his POV the story started rushing. Maybe that's just me though. I will say that there are a few cliches in there, as in the female lead is too perfect. Even the male lead is described to be extremely amazing. This is usually the case with romance novels and I don't like it at all. I'd be okay if the FL was attractive and good at gaming, or if she was attractive and good at studies. But to be good at gaming and studies and attractive is a trio that is just too unrealistic for me. See she isn't just attractive in the sense that she's pretty, she's literally described as the beauty queen of her university which means she's top of the top in even attractive people. As for the grammar, there aren't any major issues. There are a bunch of errors here and there and I'd recommend for the author to proof read all the chapters once or twice to fix them.
Very well written, I like how from one particular setting you can easily change the whole scenario- the time when it started I thought it will be fantasy, but later on, it turns out she was in a game. I loved that. It was impressive. You have done a fantastic job. I also love the character introduction and how well you can describe the farcical expression of the characters.
An adorable plotline with adorable characters. This book really made me squeal with happiness and made me giggle soo much. The FL is not your everyday girl, you can see she has goals, but I'd like her to be less self-deprecating, tho I guess that's a part of her charm too. The friends, both female and male, are not one dimensional and you can enjoy their interactions. Our Mr ML is a good boy that gets too excited when his little girlfriend is involved. I'm recommending this 3000+!
Skies, this was great! I read more than I had to!! I checked the contents and saw that the leads were going to kiss and I just had to read it! Author, you are awesome. This was a nice light read. So refreshing and so relatable! I hope you continue making this story great! I was at the edge of my seat thinking when they would talk and then that kissed happened! 😍✨ I loved it, every second. Thank you for offering to swap with me! The actual review: This book was easy to read and there were no visible errors. The writer surely did take the time to edit her piece. The emotions that this builds up within you is real!!! You'll find yourself rooting for the leads!!
Interesting plot. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of contemporary romance, but this book really pulled me in. The two leads are both so cute with their relationship, and the author's use of descriptive language only makes it even better. Slight grammar mistakes here and there, but completely readable. No worries about that. Keep up the good work, author!
Hey, i read a few chapters from your work, though still ongoing I can see it’s potential and it was really fun to read. Hope you see it to the end and keep up the good work! Also if you could perhaps read the novel i’m currently writing and leave a review it would certainly be appreciated it’s called Dimensional Monarch. Thanks in advance:)
Just from the initial chapters itself, I'm totally hooked with how the story goes. The descriptions were extremely detailed and the characters were beyond amazing. I happened to love the concept about woman, as the MC who had courageous and compassionate features of most male-leads from most stories... and its really intriguing on my part. The love story between the two is really on my taste... since they'd remind me of someone in particular... I would love to see much more interaction throughout and to journey more through the development of the story. Keep up the good work.
