Review Detail of tuba_san in Serendipity - A wink from the fate
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As a part of my new honest review policy, I will not hold back. Okay so the novel starts with a ferocious roar. No seriously. It start with lightening and thunder and a fresh serving of ACTION. The MC is Mo Hua, a university student who has developed a bit of an addiction for an online game. Immediately in chapter 2 we're meeting the male lead, also a gamer. He is described as a person who doesn't have much interest in girls but he has actually been interested in Mo Hua. If romance novels in a gaming setting are what you're interested in, it is a good idea to check this novel out. As for me, I feel like the first chapter was very well-paced but the moment the FL accidentally bumped into the ML and we switched to his POV the story started rushing. Maybe that's just me though. I will say that there are a few cliches in there, as in the female lead is too perfect. Even the male lead is described to be extremely amazing. This is usually the case with romance novels and I don't like it at all. I'd be okay if the FL was attractive and good at gaming, or if she was attractive and good at studies. But to be good at gaming and studies and attractive is a trio that is just too unrealistic for me. See she isn't just attractive in the sense that she's pretty, she's literally described as the beauty queen of her university which means she's top of the top in even attractive people. As for the grammar, there aren't any major issues. There are a bunch of errors here and there and I'd recommend for the author to proof read all the chapters once or twice to fix them.
Serendipity - A wink from the fate
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Thanks a lot. Your review really made my day. As for Mo Hua, she is not perfect at all. Her EQ has been decreased due to her terrible past. She was also meek and faced abuse but later she groomed herself to be what she is today. There is one more flaw in her which will come forward in future chapters. For Yan Xuan, I wanted him to be perfect as well but just one mistake and he loses love of his life. I will try to fix the grammar errors soon. Once again I appreciate your honest review. Thanks a lot. đ
Of course if you plan on exploring the less attractive aspects of the characters, then I'm sure it won't be annoying for a reader to read. Because as a reader I don't appreciate flawless characters at all. Characters might be fictional but as long as they are human they have to have some shortcomings
Readoholic:Thanks a lot. Your review really made my day. As for Mo Hua, she is not perfect at all. Her EQ has been decreased due to her terrible past. She was also meek and faced abuse but later she groomed herself to be what she is today. There is one more flaw in her which will come forward in future chapters. For Yan Xuan, I wanted him to be perfect as well but just one mistake and he loses love of his life. I will try to fix the grammar errors soon. Once again I appreciate your honest review. Thanks a lot. đ
Yep. I second that. I will try to keep them realistic then. That's why I chose to write a generic romance than something unrealistic. Thanks đ
tuba_san:Of course if you plan on exploring the less attractive aspects of the characters, then I'm sure it won't be annoying for a reader to read. Because as a reader I don't appreciate flawless characters at all. Characters might be fictional but as long as they are human they have to have some shortcomings