CodeyVanilla
The Good: Probably the highest rating I've ever given to a romance novel! Much love has been put into the characters and the way the scenes are portrayed makes it easy to imagine them. Solid quality, very impressed since this is the author's first book. The Bad: Premium by 21? That's a shame... Switching point of views multiple times and stating the current POV plainly breaks immersion. Try and stick with first or third in my opinion. (That's just my opinion though) The Neutral: The entire story is overused, but that's not a bad thing in this case since the author does it so well. Following a proven formula is a great way to get experience writing. Keep at it!
The synopsis is really good and the suspense made readers to read more of the story and I like the way the author presented the synopsis and the suspense in it. Every reader can easily connect to McKenna's character and the way author expressed emotions through her character is amazing. Very interesting plotline and I am very much loving it. Good luck author😊👏