Reviews of RWBY: Jaune Arc SI (Complete)

Very good history until now (Ch3) the grammar is great. Just saying although I don't like harems and I don't even know if you are going to do one, IF you do, please do not transform Jaune into a Pokemon trainer with a single-minded goal of getting them all. It's hard to make a good and believable harem but if you fo pull it off it WILL be great.

Loved it. Chad Jaune saikyou. Shame it wasn't longer. Some characters are different from cannon but it made the story much better in my opinion. Hopefully other readers will understand too.

Bruh How much until this fic gets an official review? Though to be fair Most of my attention was on The Grunt fic so

loved this story it's really compelling can't wait to read what comes next

This was an absolute delight to read. Couldn't put my phone down.

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Jaune SI does what he intends to and gets his happy ending despite the bumps.

I'mma also review this fic until it get an official 5/5 rating when you search for stories. Ma Boi you really have the worst luck when it comes to Readers

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Just for that description 10/10. make more words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words