Loved it. Chad Jaune saikyou. Shame it wasn't longer. Some characters are different from cannon but it made the story much better in my opinion. Hopefully other readers will understand too.
JManM
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LIKEThanks man. I got asked to do a rewrite by my most vocal fan, so if you are interested in a more sedate version of this story with a different SI taking over Jaune you can check out my new version. I will be going slightly AU with the bad guys plans so that they revolve around more than just 'Send Cinder in'.