Review Detail of Sorria in RWBY: Jaune Arc SI (Complete)
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Very good history until now (Ch3) the grammar is great. Just saying although I don't like harems and I don't even know if you are going to do one, IF you do, please do not transform Jaune into a Pokemon trainer with a single-minded goal of getting them all. It's hard to make a good and believable harem but if you fo pull it off it WILL be great.
RWBY: Jaune Arc SI (Complete)
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Thanks for the review. At no point is this going to turn into a bunch of bi chicks loving him and each other, never will Jaune ever utter the phrase, 'I love you all equally', and there is never going to be a situation were the girls need to team up cause Jaune is just such a stud. Blake can handle him by herself. If you are worried about this ending up as a lite pokemon crossover just remember that JaunexYang already got crushed in chapter 2. Along with Yang's overinflated ego.