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This quite good but something make it confusing why don't you just keep the same name instead give two different name, like MC is called long tian even before he got reborn but in your story when this the narration or when he talk to himself he say long Chen but other people keep calling him long tian
Having read till chapter 887 im just gonna concentrate on some things The demon monarch physique which has been written of is the summary is not described well enough seeing as it is basically like the namesake cultivation method of the novel and other novels with the namesake cultivation method make sure to make it as descriptive as possible so this is a major let doen seeing as how it started quite well and then just fizzled out. The bloodline of the mc even after waking up to a certain extent is more like a locked potential which is being unlocked, there is nothing like a bloodline no innate abilities and no bloodline abilities or phenomenons orr anything so another downer There is a heavenly world and a separate immortal world for ascenders which just comes off wierd, might as well not have a heavenly world or have it named something else as per some supremw race living in it, there is a demon world as well so it kinda makes a human mc with somw bloodline which doesnt do anything with a not well enough described physique so basically nothing like a demon makes the title even weaker The mcs breakthroughs came fast at first but then the author suddenly slowed stuff down and at this point with atleast proper plot points hes somehow made sense of how its not unreasonable to be as slow as it is right now, but its frankly too slow and has become frustrating at this point THere just have to be more named upper worlds than just heaven demon immortal and god beast worlds more races need their own worlds if this is the naming sense used THe transmigrated mc thing is just not needed and i would have preffered if long tian was the mc rather than long chen doesnt really make a difference just brings in earth for no reason Overall pretty weak for a novel which started off well almost beyond hope of become good again.
I have read this novel and it is good. The writing is good. The stability is good. Story development is nice. The character design is good and the world is very interesting. However, I also have some problems with the book, this has to do with the MC. I think the MC's character and actions are not always consistent, (this is in the sense of his core believes). However, as it is 600 chapters this much inconsistency is expected. But this also affects how he acts, with some side characters/potential harem members. His behaviour with Chu Miao (relationship was for 100 chapts - leaves her with one sentence, even though she was clearly reluctant), Xia (Even though he thought she was not real), Qin Clan's daughter, was rather unlike him. He clearly had something with each one, but left them for not a proper reason (expect Xia). At a point I was going to give up because of that. I thought you could not put more characters and was scared of putting developed characters in the Harem. But then Ming Lan, Ming Rin came, and made me decide to stick around, in hopes that you have some plans for the rest too. (Also xye ying) Honestly, I enjoy the creativity of the book and story the only Negative was benching interesting characters that had been devloped and then left behind. I hope they are not just forgotten. From some for shadowing it seems that he will have another opportunity to get Chu Mio and Xia. I just hope he gets them, because other wise, it would seem like a waste knowing so much about them, only so that they can be benched. I personally don't have a problem if you do not plan some characters to join him but if you are going to bench them I rather he spends time with his harem members that will follow him in the story. The way he dealt with Ling was interesting, but too soft. I think he should take her as a slave and make her work for his harem members so that she sees what she missed eveyday. Also Xue lies to him all the time and yet he does not care when he finds out. The meek way he acts make it kind of confusing and questions his character. Overall great work and am glad that you have write 600ish chapters and good luck with more. Focus on what you want. I do not want to consider the negatives of the book and here are my 5 star.
Good enough for me to read over 300 chapters, but nothing particularly amazing about it. Decent story, horrible editing, great update stability. The plot gets better later on. A bit too much trope, but then I've seen much worse. Would still say its much better than the vast majority of light novels I've started on here. Worth going through if there is nothing great to binge at the moment.
Well this is a cliche novel but it's author's hard work that makes me hooked on to this novel. The way he has written story and the execution of plot is all good. We have a transmigrated MC, few arrogant masters, ring inheritance, ring spirit, bloodline speciality, almost united family except the young ones jealous of MC's talent, single mother-dead father, not all females fall for MC immediately but yes a pretty easy harem, heart demon. So these are all the cliche things but believe me the execution of the plot is done nicely. Surely you will like it.
I currently hate this arc .I do not like the spirit bye his side. To blow off dying like nothing cause died once should want to live even more who knows be reincarnated again....dislike this to use the excuse no to tell him about dying from old age to have keep calm mind Then tell him anyway right before about to learn it. Theres tons stuff I can say about this arc 2 ways this going dow come out old or plot armor the hell out of it rather just learned a lower level law
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Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!