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441 review for 4,7 stars ? I guess this novel must be good๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
I do not feel it with this novel, my instinct as a reader tells me that the MC despite the fact that he is strong he will always let this intimidate and wait for others to save him and do things by being hiding these a good concept but the laziness of the MC annoys me a little, after all when you join a sect these to cultivate and everything but the MC is the only exception person will not do anything to him under the pretext that he is the disciple of a master that we have not even seen towards the beginning, and all these misunderstandings Ddu fact that his junior sister thinks he is strong but then thinks that it is absurd every time he sees that something not believable happens is what annoys me even more because it is too badly done
I was when he was in the lower realm in the sect but now i'm where he lost everything and all people forget about him Just hope he will have some revenge on mimi parents even if it was for their family sake what they did to MC was the worst. Well at the begining cultivation realm is bit confusing at the moment when they talked about a core elder, I started looking for his was at what level because the way it was written suggests at a level of cultivation and this is one of the problem at the start byg this is a good work just hope some revenge
There is something I understand not at ch 8 it introduces the power level for pets and it stops at commander but after in chapter 18 it says that purple jade has the potential to reach the level of emperor, so the person who takes care of this series can not make a chapter with the classification of power please because the further I advance and the more confused I am
Good novel but I must say one thing these that the author missed the way to express the good emotions of the MC as at the beginning, the MC found himself trapped in the body of an NPC but why I do not feel any despair or sadness when I read it seems that the MC is happy to have become a puppet and this problem appears everywhere so in the end we can not guess if the situation is good or not good
I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view
Chapter are very short after some time why ?????????????????????? Chaotic battle +short chapter = we don't understand the plot. The background is good but some time i don't understand some part like the arc when they nuke the forest to do a meat reserve and the girl with the eye something got enlighten that she need to become MC lackey even if she never see him and MC find it normal lol...........................................โฆ..................โฆโฆ.โฆ.....โฆ...................................................................................................................
This quite good but something make it confusing why don't you just keep the same name instead give two different name, like MC is called long tian even before he got reborn but in your story when this the narration or when he talk to himself he say long Chen but other people keep calling him long tian
Personally, I stopped wondering about this novel, I think he will lose after all Ellen is supposedly the heir to the crystal thing, so if she loses now I think her will solve too many holes in it. history, and these simpler for the author to make a new arc by losing the MC, even if he happens to awaken a new power at worst s will just impress the people in the crowd and make them so called power the treated like a super freak. The only thing I don't like about this story is that the MC throws flowers with each thing, it seems that he is bragging about every thing he does at the beginning of his life because he goes from one thing to the next. less than nothing to someone, but at this point those annoying especially when you know that he will always be behind someone else. You can be sure that in these series the MC will never be first in the major events.
some one can do a wiki of this novel please be cause i stopped this novel for more that 1 year waiting for more chapter and now i'm lost where i am the classification of power(realm of power), rank of spirit(like his sparow), etc... and the name of the girl friend of MC with her name who always change, i really hope someone do a wiki