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    I have read this novel and it is good. The writing is good. The stability is good. Story development is nice. The character design is good and the world is very interesting. However, I also have some problems with the book, this has to do with the MC. I think the MC's character and actions are not always consistent, (this is in the sense of his core believes). However, as it is 600 chapters this much inconsistency is expected. But this also affects how he acts, with some side characters/potential harem members. His behaviour with Chu Miao (relationship was for 100 chapts - leaves her with one sentence, even though she was clearly reluctant), Xia (Even though he thought she was not real), Qin Clan's daughter, was rather unlike him. He clearly had something with each one, but left them for not a proper reason (expect Xia). At a point I was going to give up because of that. I thought you could not put more characters and was scared of putting developed characters in the Harem. But then Ming Lan, Ming Rin came, and made me decide to stick around, in hopes that you have some plans for the rest too. (Also xye ying) Honestly, I enjoy the creativity of the book and story the only Negative was benching interesting characters that had been devloped and then left behind. I hope they are not just forgotten. From some for shadowing it seems that he will have another opportunity to get Chu Mio and Xia. I just hope he gets them, because other wise, it would seem like a waste knowing so much about them, only so that they can be benched. I personally don't have a problem if you do not plan some characters to join him but if you are going to bench them I rather he spends time with his harem members that will follow him in the story. The way he dealt with Ling was interesting, but too soft. I think he should take her as a slave and make her work for his harem members so that she sees what she missed eveyday. Also Xue lies to him all the time and yet he does not care when he finds out. The meek way he acts make it kind of confusing and questions his character. Overall great work and am glad that you have write 600ish chapters and good luck with more. Focus on what you want. I do not want to consider the negatives of the book and here are my 5 star.

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    Rise of the Demon God
    Eastern · Demonic_angel
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