Reviews of Return To The Past: I Won't Choose Humility This Time!
Return To The Past: I Won't Choose Humility This Time!
Mountain Springs
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It was a good story at the beginning! But now I am getting bored with these two sisters’ drama. The update is slow and the privilege chapters are expensive! I want this to end soon so the FL can move on with the marriage, romance and new adventures. But if this drags on I might as well drop this book.
The MC has a huge advantage but cant save herself from being kidnapped and nearly auctioned off. She is 30 in sould but act like a tween. She cant even defeat her white lotus twin sister. Overall she is a weak FL that barely scapes by. And since she is reborn with a system/space to be that weak with all the advantage is boring and irritating.
Reading 9 chapters and dropped.. The story doesn’t pique my interest In the first chapter i think its good but then come out spatial ring So this novel has a fantasy attributes That dropped my interest Because when i read the synopsis my mind think a protagonist that will work hard by her own strength Climbing every step with her own foot but it doesn’t Actually FL has already have a so much more capability and already one step ahead from the other characters because of rebirth 🙃 So she can shine by her own
The book kept me wanting to know what happens. There were Natura some filler chapters to make it longer but that's to be expected. The ending was rushed with too many loose ends. Why did she obtain the space? What happened to the family members and sister? She had so many business but only the TV show was discussed at the end. Why did the family never find out about the older brothers son who was such a bad guy? How did the old master, who had a mysterious illness, all of a sudden get better. What happened to the twin sisters kids and the lawyer who loved her. Glad I'm not spending anymore money on this book. Kind of upset I spent so much.
The story is dragging a bit. She hasn’t gotten rid of her paternal family. Her father is very dull and stupid because he’s always supporting and choosing his family over his wife and kids. The Fl has given her father many chances yet still 🤦♀️. I have read up to chapter 790 and it’s still the same cycle over and over again. ( fight her paternal family and her father supports their paternal family) I’m tired 🥱 👎
The story in general is okay. However, the transmigration and revenge is a overused in Chinese Novels, so is the use of system and external magical help. But the setting being in 1980s and having that vintage feel is quite refreshing. World background is made quite believable and portrayed in a simple but beautiful manner. Character are not very descriptive. Their personalities are not shown yet. There has hardly been any exchange between the characters. So, even though there are several characters, their personalities is very clear and seems quite 2-dimensional. What I really have issue with is the narrative style. It is less of story telling and more of describing an incident. The progression of the story is very incoherent and the characters are being introduced suddenly as if it was an after thought. The scenarios are very jumbled and not clear. It is not understandable as to when and why the situation is occuring. Overall, the story is fine but the narrative style has to be better. The characters need to be more refined!
