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The story starts with the ridiculous line of "I am an Otaku," and this pretty much defines the rest of it completely. You don't know how people work. Your characters are ridiculously unnatural and bend to your main character in ways that no sane person would ever do. He predicts nearly everything for no logical reason and any woman he meets somehow likes him just because you want them to. I should have dropped it the second you had your character sit there discussing anime details with God like it was the most natural thing in teh world, but I guess we all have our flaws. A complete basement dweller story with very little basis in reality. I'm confused why others would encourage this, but I suppose there are quite a few like minded souls these days. Good luck and grow up.
Love it! So much potentail, can't wait for more. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------
Decent ATG Fanfiction. Author considers his audiences opinions and takes them seriously into consideration as he creates a story with a decent outcome that satisfies the majority. May trigger some canon fans that love the rapist Yun Che but I personally live the main character and the progression of the story.
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I like this novel very much and plz if you don't like this or any other novel then plz don't spread negativity in reviews section and just move on bcoz its a fanfiction and its supposed to be wish fulfillment of author so don't complain about that and author is writing this book for fun and doesn't get any money out of it so there's nothing to complain about it.
Some people say that Fanfic is NTR, because the MC steals the original MC's women. Well, I only have 1 thing to say: these women have never met Yun Che before meeting the MC of this Fanfic, except for their 'bride'. I said BRIDE, that means they are'nt married or even slept before. The Fanfic MC wants to accompany their wives to the apex, unlike Yun Che who only wants 'sperm deposits' along their way to the apex. About Fanfic, I have no criticisms to make about it, apart from the launch rate, which although good, is not enough to satisfy me. The MC is good developed along the way, but what I liked the most was the progression of the novel, it is going at a slower pace than I would like, but it is still acceptable.