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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines9mth
    Posted

    Weak writing, poor in-world logic, fairly broken English and an extremely boring, shallow and unlikable main character. Somehow feels more tiring to read than actual machine translations from similar types of stories.

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    Hollywood King
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines10mth
    Commented

    One of the dumbest chapters in fiction I've ever read.

    Ch 10 Son of Destiny became a Guinea pig?
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    The Psychopath's Harem
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines1yr
    Replied to Docnox

    Yeah, this is of course based on the first two chapters, but in my experience the start is generally a very good indicator of the rest of the story, as it should be. If these kind of characters are what you actually aimed for, then some of it is just a case of differing tastes, I suppose, though I don't feel like that's entirely accurate.

    Ch 2 A Red Hot Start
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    Pokemon: Animus
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines1yr
    Replied to Docnox

    It's a cringy mess with completely over-the-top and childish character behavior that constantly break any sort of immersion. No character in the story has even come close to actual human behavior so far, and that never bodes well for a story. Narration and descriptions are weak, but not as bad as the characters, and the plot seems to steer heavily into over-the-top unfunny comedy and coincidences. It's just not good. I don't know if you've improved since you started writing this story, but if you take a look at these chapters now, can you really, honestly say that you think this is worth reading? I'm not surprised it has a bunch of views in a place like webnovel though, but that does not indicate any sort of quality. I apologize if this comes as a surprise, though I'm guessing you'll dismiss it as 'trolling' or whatever, as is often the case. Either way, it doesn't seem like it'll be worth reading any further, so good luck with your writing.

    Ch 2 A Red Hot Start
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    Pokemon: Animus
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines1yr
    Replied to Docnox

    ?

    Ch 2 A Red Hot Start
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    Pokemon: Animus
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines1yr
    Commented

    Yeah.. 3/10 writing quality seems to be the case for this story.

    Ch 2 A Red Hot Start
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    Pokemon: Animus
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines1yr
    Commented

    Looks like this is going to be a solid 3/10 story, based on this chapter.

    Ch 1 Prologue: I took a wrong turn somewhere!
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    Pokemon: Animus
    Video Games · Docnox
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Commented

    What a generic, uninteresting Mirko you've put together here.

    Ch 116 116: Target Eliminated (**)
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Commented

    So much asspulling to stick close to canon.

    Ch 110 110: Ah yes… (2)
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    The Cursed Gamer
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Commented

    So.. first fight Mirko takes after meeting the MC, she has to get saved or die.. Seriously? So much bad writing.

    Ch 108 108: Internship (5)
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    The Cursed Gamer
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Commented

    This arc was some of the worst writing I've ever read.

    Ch 371 Master Builder (End)
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    48 Hours a Day
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Commented

    Bad writing. We've been inside the fatty's head, and he definitely did not display this personality.

    Ch 304 Enjoying The Process
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    48 Hours a Day
    Sci-fi · Little Bleary Zhao
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Replied to ArashiTenebris

    Got to like.. 40? and dropped it because it was just so insanely boring.

    Ch 7 Start of the Second Test
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Replied to Springs_Halo

    Yeah, I write too and that's part of why I understand how incredibly important these beginning chapters are. In my opinion, rather delay the new chapters a little bit and spend the effort making the beginning readable. Different people will have different priorities and goals though, just giving my view of how you came off here.

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    Affinity:Chaos
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Replied to Springs_Halo

    Instead of writing a caution like this, just spend a little time and fix them up. Your first chapters are by far the most important in your story when it comes to getting readers. Doing it the way you are just shows laziness and a lack of care for your own work.

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    Affinity:Chaos
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Commented

    Chapter 7 now and there has been basically zero character interactions, just a whole lot of pretty worthless infodumping. Not a great sign for the rest of the story.

    Ch 7 Start of the Second Test
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Replied to Long_Hao_Chen

    That's because you're misunderstanding what most mean when they say this. Something can be fantastical yet still realistic, in the sense that the rules the author sets up for his magic are kept throughout the story and not just thrown in whenever they feel like it without any regard for the structure or expectations behind it. What I meant by unrealistic characters in this case is that the people in the story simply do not act like actual people would, even given their living in a magical world and positioned where they are. If characters don't act, speak, respond and generally are made to feel at least somewhat real, in relation to our own idea of what people are like, it becomes jarring and drags you out of the immersion of the story. And of course you can create a character who stays calm while killing people, while being ordered by a demon to kill people, and make it feel realistic. Plenty of such people exist today, just replace "demon" with more real-world things. It's not meant as if dragons, magic and flying ships should be removed in order for a fantasy story to feel realistic, just that the logic behind them should be consistent and at least somewhat thought out. Ideally to the point where the reader can feel like a part of the world and understand the options and limitations.

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    Lightning and Fire Given Form(REPOSTED)
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines2yr
    Posted

    MC keeps putting himself in idiotic situations where he is essentially dead, except some unforeseen person keeps popping out to save him (not planned by the MC, who is always a second from actually dying like a dog) which leads to the MC getting a powerup and repeating the idiocy all over again. The novel as a whole is like 80% filler with random people discussing events in terrible, fake dialogue and the author re-explaing everything that happens 2-3 times to waste as many words as possible. A very low quality story.

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    Unrivaled Medicine God
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines3yr
    Replied to Brokedepressed

    No one's harrassing anyone here, buddy. Whether it's free or not really doesn't matter. He chose to post his work online on a place with a review system in place and he intentionally manipulates those reviews to make his story look better than it is. The reviews are not just for the author to improve his writing, it is also (and I'd argue, mainly) for the potential readers clicking the story so they can know what to expect and decide whether it is worth it for them to spend time on the story. He's not a victim of some great crime here. Don't post things online if you can't handle criticism.

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    Re:Ron - Life Of A Reincarnated Sidekick
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  • AndromedaAirlines
    AndromedaAirlines3yr
    Replied to PopPop

    The delusions continue. Just own up to it, buddy, it'll be healthier in the long run.

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    Re:Ron - Life Of A Reincarnated Sidekick
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