The story starts with the ridiculous line of "I am an Otaku," and this pretty much defines the rest of it completely. You don't know how people work. Your characters are ridiculously unnatural and bend to your main character in ways that no sane person would ever do. He predicts nearly everything for no logical reason and any woman he meets somehow likes him just because you want them to. I should have dropped it the second you had your character sit there discussing anime details with God like it was the most natural thing in teh world, but I guess we all have our flaws. A complete basement dweller story with very little basis in reality. I'm confused why others would encourage this, but I suppose there are quite a few like minded souls these days. Good luck and grow up.
Evil_Dragon
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