Itz_Minh
Really good story in my point of view. The story development is quite smooth, the mc is building is own army but we don't see him build his own cultivation method and that could be nice. The characters design are nicely done with some evolution going on. As for the world world background i don't have anything to say, it is just perfect, well maybe do tell some more details about the cultivation world or maybe you will when the mc is getting stronger, can't wait to see. Now if i have to say a negative things is the writing quality (not bad but not good either). It lacks some good proofreading (same words or written next to each other, some contradictroy it writing is done often and could be avoid by proofreading). So far so good with some mishap happening with the writing but i recommend this story.
Well, I'd say this novel is worth my time in writing a review since I quite like it so far. Definitely give this novel a shot! Although you will see some grammatical mistakes and some misspellings, it won't be too big of a deal. In the synopsis, the mc is described as an op assassin. However, once you start reading several chapters, you'll have a better opinion of him!
As a reader i want to say the author did well in story development but the chapters are too short.. The mc given that he is reincarnated still should have time to be a kid.. The mc is too advance way of doing things.. I thinks its better if he gets the kids by being a companion just like the mc in Tales of demon and God...anyways i will see the story progress more! More powers for the author!